| "Dance on ice" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blade_Sakura On: March 27, 2005 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED this story! In fact I loved it so much in some of it it almost seemed like a movie. One of those old moves that where silent. You are a exceptional writer!
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Reviewed By: rinjii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 03:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 it's over?!?!?!?! noooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! that was a really good story! the characters did not get ooc, which in most sess/kag stories it does. i also just love the story line very orignal. by chance did you get any of your ideas for the story line from the movie the cutting edge? if you did that's cool. love your story, and um...well keep writing obviously!
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 20, 2004 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW That is such a sweet story! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reallly hate to see that this story is ova but I really can't wait to see if you r goin to do a sequel.So please please please give us a sequel if you dont mind!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 17:08 CDT
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Wow. Cool ending.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 22, 2004 14:34 CDT
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aww its over, thats so sad!! But it was great while it lasted. I cant wait ro keep reading your other stories. this was a good way to end it. tieing everything up. take care.
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Reviewed By: Orb (offline) On: July 21, 2004 10:45 CDT
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another totally great chapter as always. poor Toutousai! That's funny, but sad. I hope you write a chapter on the olympics, that would be awesome.
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 18:26 CDT
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Poor Kagome. What is a girl to do with a very horny youkai. Have lot of fun that what. Well another good chapter. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: July 15, 2004 15:56 CDT
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aww that was so cute!! the anal thing was a little weird, but you wrote it very tastefully, good job!! The entire lemon was very sweet (ironic lol, sweet lemon). I hope thats not the end of the story, it could make a good ending tho. Please write more? lol
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 00:08 CDT
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This has been great. i liked the story. Though I think if you had slowed down the pace and made more things happen, like some days of just normal things, or had them really get to know each other. And by the way will they be going to the olimpics or will Sesshoumaru bet the snot out of the guy who is forcing her. Please update soon. Later
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a short chapter but it was satisfying. ^.^ a tiny bit of lime there but all's good. I'll be looking for another update soon. ~Miyumi
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Long time no see but me still likey this chapter and i'am so happy that kagome and sesshomaru r still togetha and i really hope u update soon ok!!
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 13:32 CDT
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that was a close one, after all that, if they broke up i'd die!! I loved the ending, lol ruin the mood, thats so funny. I hope you cant update soon with a the skating adn the olympics and possibly a lemon? *wink wink* lol
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Reviewed By: Orb (was online) On: July 03, 2004 09:54 CDT
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this chapter was written veryt well. The interaction betweehn Inutaisho and Sesshomaru was done so well i almost peed lol. i cant wait for anthoer chapter.
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 29, 2004 22:45 CDT
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im always excited to see an update in any story i read so i hope you dont think im just impatient, im just really happy! so now im going to say that thing i always say which is... YAY!!! so hope to read again soon, always, ficfan
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