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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2010 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story here. It is funny that I had just told some one a story Idea almost the same as this (Kikyo tring to pass her self off as Kagome though), when they pointed me to your story and I am glad they did.
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Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 02:50 CDT
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lovely! this is my third time i have read this story and i still like it! congrats!
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 07:35 CDT
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That was so incredibly beautiful! And you wrote it so well! =D The characterization was near-perfect, and the ending was very satisfying. Tell me, have you considered writing Inu/Kag lemons? =) There are so many of those lacking the proper touch that I believe you could bring. Well anyways, I greatly enjoyed reading this story, and would love to see more from you! ^^
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Title: steered to you by King baka
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2008 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you the premise of the story before I read was wonderful. I'm completely satisfied now. Took me two days to finish and I'm sad that is over cause I could have gone on reading forever. I'm glad that she was able to come back to herself in the end, cause I don't hate her. I definitely don't do the Inu kik thing so I tend to root against her most often but She isn't a villain not really. I'm going to check out your other stuff now.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2008 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the finest fanfictions I have ever read. Your characterization of Kikyou was simply amazing. That is exactly how I picture Kikyou; a lost soul, consumed by lust for vengeance and bitterness, but still good deep down. You did a wonderful job with Kagome as well, beautifully contrasting Kagome and Kikyou. Kagome's strength, her pure heart, allowed her to remain herself, and not be consumed by the dead, clay body she found herself stuck in. And your portrayal of Inuyasha was just as incredible, as he slowly comes to terms with the Kikyou of old and the Kikyou that now walks the earth, never wavering in his conviction or desire to save Kagome. Bravo! Your style of writing is very polished as well, and I can tell you are a writer by profession. Finally, your ending was perfect. I would have been dissapointed without that last chapter, but that kiss left me feeling completely satisfied. Thank you for the wonderfully entertaining and enjoyable read.
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Reviewed By: Girl1055 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries* Oh dear god! That was so heartbreakingly beautiful. I-...- *Sobs(YEs I actually am crying right now* You need too right more fics. PLEASE. I may be a Kikyo hater but I still feel the SMALLEST bit of sympathy towards her now that I have read this fic. Howver, I am still a Kikyo hater. If you decide to write more InuYasha fics PLEASE let me know and I will read them!
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Reviewed By: Moon LaFleur On: April 16, 2005 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was simply beautiful beyond all the telling of it.
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Reviewed By: QueenKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 20:40 CDT
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i looooooooooooove it sooooooooooooooooo much great writing!!!
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Title: Stolen Soul
Reviewed By: 29 W On: April 16, 2004 15:30 CDT
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This fanfiction was great! It was related to the true story of Inuyasha.Most fics I've read took favorites of Kikyou or Kagome,but your fic can really happen in the animie.Great writting
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Reviewed By: I am loved by friends [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 15:11 CDT
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wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow good story, write more storys
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Reviewed By: Princess Lisa On: April 10, 2004 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was just simply wonderful to read.
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Title: hello!!
Reviewed By: Inu addict [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is agreat story,BUT DONT LET B THE END!!!!if the rating thing would let me go higher i would give it a 1000
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kristy On: April 08, 2004 17:53 CDT
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this chapter was the cream of the crop awesome job i hope u write an other fanfic i would so read it!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 16:54 CDT
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That was really good, I think it was nice for you to give Kikyo a happy ending. I am not a really BIG fan of hers hell, I use to be a Kikyo hater, but now I feel sorry for her and she is a so-so character in my eyes!!!!!! Nice story!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sobrina On: April 08, 2004 14:36 CDT
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Aww. Such a sweet ending! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 00:59 CDT
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Wow... just... wow. Nice job! Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: April 05, 2004 00:38 CDT
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Chapter 10 made me cry.... Thank you for writing such a beautiful fanfiction. I sincerely look forward to additional chapters. You have a wonderful talent! gabgirl209@aol.com
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Title: Tears fall for her pain
Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I can't believe you're not happy with this chapter! It's amazing! Really well written, and very insightful. And soooo sad! Please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: terri botta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter. please update quickly. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: arisu-the-pink On: April 01, 2004 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just found this today, and I'm in love. I hope the muse continues to inspire for frequent updates. Angst is a good thing, as long as it builds up to a happy ending -- kudos to you :-) It was a few chapters back but I'd have to say my favorite line so far said something about high schools not granting degrees to dead people no matter how hard they study. Hee hee, Beautiful!
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Reviewed By: Silent Tears of Agony [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 14:23 CST
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Very interesting. I like it. Please try to update soon. ^_~ ~Silent Tears of Agony~
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Reviewed By: Cat61 On: March 31, 2004 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just picked up on this fic, not having been to mediaminer in a while, and with ff.net, I'm lucky if a page stays the same for more than an hour.:) But, to the review: So far this story is excellent!:) I sympathize a bit with Kikyo, but some of the stuff she pulls is atrocious! So I like the portrayal you're going with:) Please update again soon, and I'll look for the story on ff.net as soon as i can.:)
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Title: What not to do...
Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
while reading this story: Listen to Evanescence. Bad Idea! Good, really sad music, good, really angst-y type of story (even though I'm wishing for a happy ending). Good combo. I really like what you've done so far. I know you warned it's only going to get worse before it gets better, but I'm not sure how much worse it can get. I think all we're missing is Sesshomaru and maybe a run in with Kagura and then the waterworks will really fly! Please keep updating!!
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Reviewed By: lilly bet On: March 30, 2004 04:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I loved it.I just hope we can get some kagome/inuyasha fluff soon so sweet it will make our teeth hurt. Please continue and update soon.
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Reviewed By: TokiDoki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 00:16 CST
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I reviewed your story at FF (jewel9992), but then I saw you were posting it here too, where I'm actually a member, so I will review here, and try to spread the love a bit. Your last chapters have been sooo good. You are brilliant at building suspense. (that was a particularly evil cliffhanger.. hehe) but I appreciate how quickly you update too, so i will try to bear it until you are nice enough to have time to update again. Keep up the good work, thanks again. and Happy Belated Birthday! :o)
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Reviewed By: AMANDA_TRINH On: March 28, 2004 17:18 CST
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GOOD FIC!!!PLEASE LET THIS FIC BE A INUYASHA/KAGOME FIC!!!*gathers a lot of people and goes around Kikyo(the hoe)and saying "go to hell kikyo u dumbass hoe"over and over again!!!!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: Mareana On: March 27, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story pleas coninue! I don't know what ffnet is so I would really like you to write it here pleas update soon!
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Title: from the monsterkittie
Reviewed By: cat person On: March 26, 2004 06:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry many more haven't read this story. I'm enjoying it so far, and look forward to the rest on ff.net if necessary. Please update here (or there) soon!
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Reviewed By: Lilly bet On: March 26, 2004 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you kidding me I love the story. please please continue it.
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Reviewed By: monsterkittie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 05:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, so good. I agree. I hope Kikyo gets it in the rear. I also think she should be pushed off a cliff. But that's just me. Please update soon!
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