| "No return No exchange" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: princessmikoyokai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohhh what happened to this one oh well it was still good. =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Evil Eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic a lot ^_^;; Though.. a christmas fic? XD Not really no. One thing I'd like to point out is that at some points you mess up past/present time which can be confusing to read. Keep up the writing d^_^b
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