| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Title: ROFL, Squall a Warlock?
Reviewed By: A New Hottness ~Not logged in I didn't know ^u^~ On: March 16, 2005 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Inumoon3-chan are you slow? Who said Squall was a warlock/wizard. I CAN SEE YOU NEVER PLAYED OR BEAT FF8!!!!!! Squall wasn't that magical,...rofl! The Sora/ RIku thing I understand but the Squall thing just makes me think a little too hard... Imagine if his cute ass was a Warlock, the next you know he'll be dressing up like Mickey. ROFL! OWWWWWW My stomach... Well if I finish my hw, I'll call tonite hoe, don't wait for me!!! When will I be able to update.... WAI WAI I NEED A NEW COMPUTER! HOW ABOUT YOU SEND ME ONE FOR MY BIRTHDAY!!!! Wuv ya and JA NE!!!!!!! Oh yeah and thank you I haven't laughed that hard in a long time, wuv ya much. JA NE once again!!!!!!!! ^u^
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 15, 2005 15:29 CST
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A reveiw a day keeps the doctor away.^_____^. When you don't reveiw a story dies.;__; i like stories espesialily m-preg.O.O O_______________O I'm wired had to take stupid tests.Damn govorment acesment. O_o0..................^_____^ me wired..... adios from Harpy Link452
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 13, 2005 20:26 CST
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I feel loved.^___^
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Title: what Harpy Link452 think's
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 13, 2005 20:12 CST
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M-preg stories are a $1,000,000 a one. We need more cause there cute,There different. And we can torture men as much as we want!^___^ All they write about is preps and cheerleaders.I HATE THEM SO MUCH!Preps think there the best thing scince t.v. and videogames.They make fun of us gamers just cause we think Sora or Squall or even Link are cute.There a hell of a lot cuter then all of the rapers and popstars.What so they don't exciste you'll never get in with snoop dog or usher.Link is so much cuter then the two of them.Ha we can write stories about us geting together with um HAHAHA!^___^.AM I right.If I am raise the roof or give me a haller.Anyway that's all scpet write MORE please and more goofy food chocolate covered asparigous,and three bean stu. Adois from Harpy Link452
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 13, 2005 01:55 CST
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Oh and evryone else jump for joy we did it we got her to update!(Dances around room almost killing ducky to open your heart,kisses Link and sonic figers, kisses Link manga poster,and kisses Game Boy Advance witch has Chain of Memories in it)I just beat Malificent and in Twilight Town.Bitch dragon!^___^ I just had 57 powdered doughnuts.Ho and the poster it from Zelda no desentu did I spell it right.What ever.Mocho gosto senior Link.hope I spelt it right if not I'm pethedic and hpoe that's the right expration i'm trien to say I Love Link in spanish.Sora give birth allready or at lest get to your 6th month.I want riku to sufer through your mood swings and cravings.I got a goofy food sugjetion,Pickle Pinapple smoothies or meatloaf and garbonzo paste sandwitches.^__^.Hehe I'm evil.Well that's all Adios from Harpy Link452
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Title: You welcome ^__^
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 13, 2005 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You very welcome I really didn't get it till now . Your not the only one who writes this sort of thing,what about that move junior.^__^0. O__O0.Link:Not again you writen to that m-preg girl again!Me:Ya want me ta do the same thing to you.Link:Dono I was thinken about haven kids.Me:O.O didn't know you felt that way Linky-chan.Link:O///O mabey I shouldnt a said anythin.Me: you wouldn't last 5 minets in labor.^//^.Link:Bet I could!Me:Your on elfy. Link:If I can't Sora can't.Me:why?Link:He's too young.Me:-___-0 well any way thanks for menchoning me I'm in another story on this site it's called Sleeping Rose.I will try to get logged in on here.I have to wait for my dad's pemison.;___;.Adios from you gessed it Harpy Link452.
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Title: n.n
Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:37 CST
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thas kool n.n wooo n.n cant wait... i'm getting to update mine... soon soon soon... pwomise... i hope..
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Title: Am I anoying
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 09, 2005 21:43 CST
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Please explane the whole pregnancy thing to me? I mean I know how it works but how can it work on Sora and Leon?What alien experimantation.O___o0. O.k. I'm weirden myself out now.My only prob is that ya need to explain it to the few of us who only have Chain of Memories.I.e.Me.;_;. Well Sony was being an asshole at E3 last year.Nintendo bashen smut mongers.Well on the same page anybody besides me happy about the new Zelda comen out ^__^.Link was so sezzy.anywho back on topic i love the story update NOW i can't wait.Adios from Harpy Link452
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Title: I'm not alone!
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 07, 2005 23:26 CST
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YAIES! I'm not the only one who reviewed late ^___^.Adios from Harpy Link452
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Title: INUMOON3-CHAN!!! MY INTERNET IS BACK!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YAY YAY!!!!!! I GOT IT BACK HOE! I GOT IT BACK BITCH!!!! YAYA YAYA YAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, I didn't like this chpater, Mikan was being a bitch... And you made Sora too girly!! Well antway j/k with the enjoyment factor! I'M NOT A BIG MEANIE LIKE YOU HOE!! AND YOU'D BETTER SEND ME SOMETHING FOR MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please...I need money, send me some money ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I'll call you on the weekend or Tuesday!!! SO JA NE!
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Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:37 CST
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It did it again sorry from Harpy Link452.
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Title: >__
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:36 CST
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MY THING SCRUED UP I SAID ADIOS FROM HARPY LINK452 LAST TIME AND IT CUT IT OFF.I'M PISSED OFF BIG TIME.>____
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Title: Here we go again
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 05, 2005 17:32 CST
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I'm writing another review.I'm really bord today so back off.Sora is such a sweety maby a little too sweet for his own good.I mean if Riku keeps sayen crap about not haven kids.SCRUE HIM he's not the pregnant 1 now is he.O///O.Didn't think so ^___~.Link:What ya writen? Me:Go sit on a egg beack brain.Link:>__
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Title: I'm EXCITED
Reviewed By: Harpy Link452 On: March 04, 2005 21:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know I just reveiwed it 5 seconds ago.but I wasent done before.Riku was really sweet and he was so kind when Sora was upset at the end of the story.I bet Sora's gona be a great(Mama?)Squal was so sad in chapter 4 I think?(I read it 3 days ago)Cloud is such a CHICKEN cluck,cluck. I really anjoy the way you discribe the boys bodies are. ho well. O.K. I'm done now Adios from Harpy Link452.
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Title: my first reveiw
Reviewed By: Harpy Link 452 On: March 04, 2005 21:22 CST
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I realy liked the way you told the story except all the lemons. Why so many ho well it's your fic. You know this is my first ever review online no lie.Learned that from yall.I'm a huge Link,Sora,Sonic,Shadow,and Rayman Freak! And I'd like ta join up with you guys. But I'm rambaling ether way your story ROCKS! only resones I'm dooen this is too see the next part.OH and I have a suggetion sora's kids should be 1Boy and 2girls and they should be born in the spring. Why because it's warmer. And you should speed this thing up here I wanta hear about Sora's 6th month.And Clowd's really mean too Squal I feel sorry for him.That's all hope you finish this up bye.
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