| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Title: Pregnancy
Reviewed By: ILoveRiku On: February 25, 2005 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this FanFic! The whole Pregnancy thing is Adorable. But the way you've made Sora act is even more Adroable!! Riku is just the same old Sexy Riku! Leon...woah! I think you did a nice job on his additude! and I swear I thought Cloud would be the one to be pregnant! but anyways all in all its great! I loved the Kiari bashing. I don't hate her..but I don't exactly like her either..kinda like Riku, huh? lol. Please update soon! I'm addicted to these type of storys!!
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Title: camigirl4k3
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, long time no update. but I love it just the same. and I think I good month for the baby would be january.I dunno, I just picture sora holding newborn baby while snow is coming down..so kawaii!! but yea..also because january is very lucky..*cough* for matters that will remain unknown*cough* anyway. I'm very interested on how they can have babies and where it'll come out in all that stuff...since u said you couldn't put it in the story, then how bout' (if you have time of course) you could e-mail it to me. like explainin it or something... It's not that I'm perverted..(far from it) I'm just curious..lol this is one of the best sites on this site! I love it! keep writing and ..never open a cardoor while on the freeway! until ur next update! -ja ne
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 22:33 CST
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WOO!!! you finnally updated!!! it took my like 3 days to read the thing XD but it was GREAT!!! i WILL update SOON, ASAP, I PROMISE!!! LOVE YAHS!!! BYES!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 18:47 CST
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Yah, I though you might like the pic XP Heh, I drew it at school and it was funny... heh... miss yous... update soon... byz
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Reviewed By: demon_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE your fic :) its high up ther on one of the best fics i ever read! please continue writing this! :)
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good ending:EVERYONE GETS STRAIGHT. And another thing,stop using my name before lemons.i got in trouble for your DBZ story and im only gonna reed action stories from now on,besides this.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 07:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um awesome story! ...though that was kinda evil that you put like 700 spaces inbetween the sentences....lol clever girl! but neway..in short your story rocks .update soon.lol
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Title: BITCH! YOU REVIEWED YOUR OWN STORY!!!! >o
Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You little hoe! You reviewed your own story, I HATE YOU! Maybe that's why you didn't see Gravitation 5 and 6 yet, hahahah lol! I'm sooo mean ^u^ And I thought you were fair, hey did I read these updates yet? Hmmmmm. NOPE! I'll read it later, and I'm updating today!!!!! YA Y! I know some people have been waiting, JA NE! And stop being a revview whore!!!!!! Luv ya, ^u^ chu chu kisses for you!! JA NE once again!!!!!
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Title: This fic rocks!!!
Reviewed By: yaoi_fan-girl 72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story please update soon...oh and i love the idea that squall is having three babies or more (^_^)!!! anyway update soon i can't wait till the next chapter so hurry up and kairi's a bitch and sora and riku r just to cute!!!!
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Reviewed By: heather aka kasumi1205 On: November 28, 2004 21:59 CST
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OMG you gotta do more chapters and please please hurry. im not trying to rush you or anything though...i agree with you kairi is a bitch..I think kairi needs to have a near fatal accident again..that was funny.. you are amazing.. ps.please please please update!! ( ^_^ )
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Title: good good good
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry with the story please!!!!!!! i just cant wait for the rest of it
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 18:52 CST
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ya... that was short... you cheater... puting like five lines between each sentence so it looked big... heh... smart... update soon... i miss da updatedness... ^_^
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: bookwormloverjen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you think Squall and Cloud should get back together? yes i do they seem lonely Do you think Squall should also have more than one child? yes the more the merrier And finally do you think Sora and Riku should get married right away and then start facing random conflicts or wait to get married and overcome all their conflicts before hand? i think that they should wait a little longer to over come the differences
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Reviewed By: Dreamers On: November 22, 2004 21:31 CST
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Yes Cloud and Squall should get back together and it would be interesting to see multiple mini Clouds running around. Riku and Sora get married and then have all sorts of problems.
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Reviewed By: Da_pepsi_girl On: November 19, 2004 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It a good story, but I can't read it with out lol. My mom thinks am crazy now!
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