| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: kasumi1205 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please PLEASE please UPDATE!! i wanna know what happens with sora and riku..i've never been a fan of gay fics but this is an exception! I love this storie!!!!!
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Title: My ideas.....
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes squall and cloud should get back together and no I think they should only have one child....I dunno but one child just fits well with that pair....maybe because...I don't think squall can handle two...and secondly...it will make riku and sora's situation that much funnier...lol, also, yes I think Riku and sora should get married right now and face all the situations to come...it would be better for their child and they won't break up as easily....because they remember 'that's my husband' instead of just 'boyfriend' if you put it at the end...it takes more of the romantic stuff that u can do out of it....especially the wedding night^__^ (I mean I've never seen sora and riku, ion a fanfic, get married before...it would have to make tis story my favorite...) lol and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:16 CST
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YES!!! though the sex'd be funny if they didnt... and ya, like you said, itd be funny with 3 lil clouds... hehe... and i think they should do the conflict thing first... THEN get married...
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Reviewed By: it doesn't matter On: November 11, 2004 19:29 CST
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Yes, Squall and Cloud should get back together and yes they should have more than one child! Lastly, Sora and Riku should get married first and face random conflicts afterwards. There, are you happy now?
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 11:54 CST
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YAY!!! life has meaning again!!! X.x heh... ya... missed you, continue more ^_^
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Reviewed By: PSL On: November 02, 2004 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is great! You need to update soon cuz I'm becomming addicted.
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Reviewed By: Shizu_chan21 On: October 18, 2004 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a tremendous fic going on here. I really hope you continue to update. Thank you for such great entertainment. Your story really hits on all of my emotions. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Da-Pepsi-girl On: October 07, 2004 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend Carter had a dream that he was having a baby too. good fic, Keep going!!!!!!!!!! (: *Smiles*
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Title: BUSTED!!!
Reviewed By: Inumoon3 (signed out) On: October 03, 2004 15:42 CDT
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Hello minna-san!!! I not gonna be able to update for a while, because I'm grounded... I've written the next chapter and as soon as I'm off punishment I'll post the next chapter. I'm sneaking to write this so I can't say too much, bye!!! P.S: Still read and review!!!
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 21:13 CDT
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NEW EMAIL ADDRESS: FLUFFYINULUVER@aol.com! So email me whenever you just can't wait for an update or you just want to say hi!!!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok heres the thing,this story sucks more than a bowl of festering ticks.YOU`RE A HORRIBLE AUTHOR!!!! You should just go to hell....jk. Good story...but im more of a fan of action and guy/girl romance......lesbian beats gay,but then again im a boy.....well,keep it up...and read AWAKENING!
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Title: woo!
Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 21:59 CDT
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go u!!! thnx fer ur reivew... i updated... now ur turn... its review tag! ^_^ hehe... ya... um... hm.. i didnt no u had honors... wow... go u... i hav english fer honors and thats it... WOW... well um... hope to talk soon.. buh byz.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:34 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!! that was awsum!!! yay!!! i so happy... so ya... i just relized i hav u on aim... -_- i feel stupid... well ya... thnx... um... update soon... or i will send george to eat u... and ur muses mwahahahaha... *cough* srry... ok so ya... buh byz
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 15:04 CDT
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grrrrrrrr... i got a email sayin u updated and i get this!!! ahhhh!!! u bring pain... hury hury with the updating the reel story plz... im tired of waitin...
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have this freakin feeling that im the only boy who likes this fic.You see,i hate when girls do guy/guy stories,cause im not gay or bisexual,but yours remains to be cool.I did get grounded cause i was caught reading it,though.Anyways,could you pretty please review my story AWAKENING and if you played FF10,you may like Jecht`s Journey And have you read my Cid Highwind fic yet? I think you did and you apologized.it`s ok,im probably the worst author on this site.
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