| "The Keeper of my Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: [ST]*Shinigami On: August 02, 2004 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant....Hilarious...Left me in stitches! Got some funny ideas there, but I think Kairi should have died. Just died. This has got to be the funniest Kingdom Hearts Ive ever read!
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Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 10:58 CDT
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so i made to part 1`s for Um....Anyways i love you story.I hate male-male stories usually.But you made the first good one.You see im a boy,so i think lesbians are more casual.Inumoon3,you are probably one of the best authors out there,but do what i do.Use those talents to make stories children dont have to sneak to read.Oh by the way.....REVIEW MY FICS!!!!! I think you`ll like the Cid Highwind show.And at the bottom of Where`s Cloud?,how come im not there.
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Reviewed By: Ezri-Candy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee Hee! I just love this story and I'm glad that I stumbled across it. I like mpreg stories but they are quite rare. I think that you are doing a great job with this. Keep up the good work! Ezri-Candy ps. I love your author's notes, sora and riku are just so cute in them!
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Title: vash
Reviewed By: gunslingeroutlaw [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so great i love it and u need to write more im becoming obsesed with it and read l fro 1-13 and nowits 1:02 and im going to bed so please write moreoh and by the way if my parents fund out i was gay tey would react a lot more then riku and soras parents did. and male pregnency wow and u need to get cloud out of sephrothe house what wre u thinking that is not a good pair sephroth can be controling at times anyway keep on doing what ur doing more yaoi and lemon (hehehe)
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 10:57 CDT
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yay! i got to read the next chapter b4 i leave! yay!!! ok... wow... stupid cloud... he's unbelievably stupid... even tho u said they might get back 2gether... wow... ya... cant wait to get the next chapter... but i'll have to i guess... maybe i'll get luky and it'll b dun wen i get bak... well um... ya... um... c u l8r... well.. u no wat i mean... buh by ^_^
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Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 21:01 CDT
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Title: WTH!
Reviewed By: camigirl4k3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! loved the story! but why, the heck, is sora going to abort that baby!!!!!!! please let aerith talk some sense into them! please! I think that riku's just being a stupidhead,they did that and he should pay the consequences!And the fact that he should take Sora's feelings into account!He's the one having the baby! not Riku!(sp) and as for squall! Did cloud ever say no? ....they should have talked it out rather than him running upstairs! ......that's all I have to say.....really good story.....whew.....got a little in to that........
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Title: Thank you for all your thoughtful reviews
Reviewed By: inumoon3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 10:33 CDT
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Thank you for all your thoughtful and helpful reviews! Don't worry I won't stop this story till' it's finished so keep your heads up!
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excelent... mormormor!!! ur not actually ganna make sora and riku giv up the baby tho... r u? i wud h8 u if u did... humhumhum.... well update soon! thnx ^_^
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Reviewed By: zackman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 15:51 CDT
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awsome!!! i havnt reviewed tilll now... but yet again... AWSUM!!! so um the baby... BOYBOYBOY!!! unless there's mor than one... but 1 at least should b a boy... plz... um... good go!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moonsong On: June 05, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!! I can't wait for the other parts here, I'm so anxious to see what happens!!! :( I think you should hurry up and get more chapters out. Oh and from one author to another(I deal in the Gundam Wing,Gravitation, and Final Fantasy fandoms 2x1 FOREVER!)try and make your chapters longer. It shouldn't be too hard, since you have good developed characters and a good plot to work with. And besides, I know all your readers are wishing for more Riku/Sora and Cloud/Leon!!! Make us happy, we know you can do it!! ^_________^
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Reviewed By: PSL On: June 03, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you just have to post the next chapter soon.
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Title: write please
Reviewed By: wavedragon On: June 03, 2004 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story can you please write another chapter soon. i can't wait till sora finds out. (imagining Rikku's face. lol)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sora should get pregnant!!! THis is great,I love this fic!! Hope to see more soon!
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeb On: May 25, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you better write more. it's a wonderful story. i can't wait to see the young couples faces when they find out there small (BIG) suprise.
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