Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 08:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
If authors want to write fics that are amusing I'm very happy to read them but I think they should at least make sense. There just isn't enough description in this fan fic for anyone to understand what it's about. That also means the story isn't long enough for decent characterisation. The reader finds out nothing they don't already know about the characters from the TV series. I suggest that some consideration about the story line before the tale is written would be helpful.
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