| "Shattered Beads and Repaird Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady Raven On: October 12, 2004 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: inuyashapup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i agree it says chapter 2 not 1 i am guessing there is one before that one oh and to much kissy there needs to be more action and what well inuyasha do about the beads!!
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Reviewed By: animeotaku418 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! awsome story but......uh....did i miss the first chapter or something cause it said that was chapter two so now this ariel is confused.....@.@ heheh anyways, i hope to see another update soon! well toodles! ^^
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Reviewed By: inu-mate On: April 02, 2004 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, I have to say that the fic was great but shippo is spelled wrong but thats ok. I really like to see what happens. please finsh it.
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Reviewed By: inu-mate On: April 02, 2004 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, I have to say that the fic was great but shippo is spelled wrong but thats ok. I really like to see whaqt happens. please finsh it.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 10:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sweet I liked it!!!!!! Okay here comes the hard part of reviewing, your spelling and grammar needs a little work. It's not that big though, Shippou's name is as you can see spelled wrong and there are a couple places where you didn't capitalized the names. See that wasn't much!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, flow away girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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