Reviewed By: An interested reader On: April 01, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading what you have written of this fic. There are a few moments that suggest you are young - but hey we all were once! Overall they do not detract from the overall quality of the writing, and story line, nor do they spoil the readers enjoyment of the fic. You show great promise here, and I dearly hope that you will continue this story. Please don't let the lack of reviews deter you from updating - MM is notoriously bad for poor review ratios - I've seen well established, popular writers bemoaning the fact that their reviews have dropped. Maybe one problem is the fact that you don't actually introduce the DBZ characters until the third chapter - however, this is your story, and you must write it as you see fit. If the casual reader can't get past the fact that you start off with your original characters, and decide not to continue reading, that's their loss not yours. Well, I shall certainly be looking out for updates to this entertaining fic, please do continue.
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