| "Coffee and Donuts" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: nice
Reviewed By: Hikaru-RoseRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please contune i love this so much
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Reviewed By: Tylec Asroc On: April 11, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really liked how you used the chat-room style to re-introduced our antagonist here. The faceless screen-names make for some enticing mystery, and once the masks are pulled back you don't want to stop. I suppose this sort of 'resurrection' thing might seem contrived, but you got me so interested that the mechanics seemed just as plausible as any 'R&A survived factory' plot. Speaking of facelessness, withholding the replacement's name was a neat effect - though it left her an avatar without much personality at first. But it was a neat way to let this fan-character slip under the radar and into the team. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2004 06:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Damn. So what is he going to do? Poor guy but he got what he deserved. cool story.
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Title: Taka-Wolf
Reviewed By: Taka-wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 13:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story can you update soon? oh and pritty please read my story The Animals Craft and tell me what you think please??????????
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Title: OMG! CONTINUE!!!!
Reviewed By: HieiandTouyaLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
U GOTTA! CONTINUE!!!! please please please!!! I WILL WAIT FOR THE SOTRY TO CONTINUE!!!
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Title: It was a killer peice
Reviewed By: A Friend of Robins On: April 14, 2004 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, the only thing thats still bugging me is why you didnt finish it...I think if you ever by the rights to WHR that it would make a grand episode, A suggestion for the title would be...The Love I once knew.
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Title: It was a killer peice
Reviewed By: A Friend of Robins On: April 14, 2004 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, the only thing thats still bugging me is why you didnt finish it...I think if you ever by the rights to WHR that it would make a grand episode, A suggestion for the title would be...The Love I once knew.
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Reviewed By: Yurako On: April 03, 2004 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really, REALLY LIKED IT!!!!! And just as you said PLEASSSEEEE WRIITTEEE MMMOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!!! okay now I have written too much please continue!! See ya ^_-
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Reviewed By: Ryu T. On: April 03, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze keep going I like it don't end it there Update soon
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Reviewed By: tfc_angel_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow,plz keep going,this fanfic is very touching,i hope to see a update from you soon!
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Reviewed By: row On: April 01, 2004 22:27 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it keep w/it.
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Reviewed By: Marin M On: March 31, 2004 10:30 CST
Comment/Review:
*does puppy face* Plz keep it going!
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