| "Immortality" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Liz
Reviewed By: Daughter of the Void [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i don't like crying in the middle of the day but I can't help it. This is sad. Really really sad. Inspirational though. I have loads of ideas running rampant through my brain. I thank you for it. If I write anything that I'm thinking (doubt it though) I'll give you a recomendation. For both your stories. Back to the story. I love it because it gives you something to think about. What if this were to happen to him? How would he deal? You gave me lots of things to think about which is good 'cause there aren't many. Thank you oh so much for your great works of fanfiction. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Nanashi(meaning I can't think of a good name.) On: May 22, 2004 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. I don't really think of this as angst, though, because you didn't delve into a horribly long speech about how horrible Yuuske's life is and how much he wants to die and yada yada yada. Major points for that. Overall a great, enjoyable fic. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Keitsu Han'ei On: April 29, 2004 04:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniff* very in character and sad *sniff* poor yuusuke
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 12:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep writing :)
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 00:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know I love your fic "Mission X" so you won't think I'm being at all unfair with this review. I honestly wouldn't call that an angsty fic. The plot was basic and near the surface the entire time. It was, though I hate to use this word, slightly superificial. I just didn't get the signature engrossing 'depression' that accompanies the angst genre. I'd edit this one (make the ending more concise) and use more colorful language in the process. It could be very good. The wording in one or two places was unclear. On the plus side, the character portrayal was true to each particular character.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune 005 (Not signed in) On: March 24, 2004 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Job! This fic had a good mix of emotion. That's all I have to say.
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Reviewed By: JaggedLittlePill [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe you did a great job with this..my opinion at least and I believe other's who read this will think so too.You did a great job and I really can't think of much else to say..besides keep up the great work and well...Ciao!
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