| "Creatures of the Night Series Book 1 Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Yueneko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 22:49 CDT
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Neat! I like this idea, i just hope sakura will stay sakura. I don't like the idea of Temp r whatever her name is talkng over! Unless of course Temp conbined with sakura or something. Like If sakura was in real danger of dieing that witch did a spell that melded them together so sakura woulden't die. That woul be cool! Ok well enough of my rambleing! Good luck with the next chapter! ^_^ Yue
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Title: Hell Raising Gods Of Death BWAAHAAHAAHAA!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nikikeya [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi ya miss me I that annoying person 'Nikikeya-chan Again' who reveiwed this on your fanfiction.net account. first off I have no clue what writting styal is so I always put 10 secoundly to The Otaku by fionn; Yes dear we know the fox is a demon thankyou also it skips ahead so we don't know how long a time passed between the Yoko leaving for Konoha and the sealing also the things huge so it can definatly trash whole villages in abound and don't forget about the tails...I like the Yoko being female reminds me of "Good Night My Knight" ^-^ Ja! -Nikikeya
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Reviewed By: WookieeBeta On: October 07, 2004 21:39 CDT
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(Side Note: The flame is amusing ^_^) THOU SHALT POST MORE!! OR THOU SHALT SUFFER THE WRATH OF A RAVING FANFIC-DEPRIVED BINDER-CARRIER!!
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Title: The Otaku
Reviewed By: Fionn On: June 30, 2004 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first two chapters are great but third one just SUCKS 'cause if you botherd to check what is said about Kyuubi you'd know that the Demon Fox had been around for a very long time before the Fourth Hokage sealed it and that it visted destruction upon many places before Konoha. Also Kyuubi unlike Shukaku can't comunicate with Naruto in any way unless Naruto visit's it like he did when he first learnd to access the it's Chackra. Finally the manga makes it clear that Kyuubi is a demon!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so he is a werewolf? neet story btw. but will naruto and co. find out? does tsunade or who ever is hokage in your story know? what about his partner people...and why is somebody named hanyou? is only half human or what? when will you update! please update soon!
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