| "Old Paths, New Journeys" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Scathach [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You've got an interesting start here. One suggestion though--try to work on the spacing...it makes it easier to read, especially if you're changing subject/perspective. I'll keep an eye out for what's next!
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Title: Good...let's have more!
Reviewed By: shoujo22 On: March 26, 2004 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up kay!
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