| "Jenny's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
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Reviewed By: Relyt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 17:46 CST
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i would liketo be have sex with both of them at the same time penis suxing and hairy virga licking shave m cube hair pleas i have sex with women over 80 even though i am only 18 saggy boos and wriky sagge penis that with i am a by sexual sex with both sexs
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Reviewed By: EvaSkiman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 20:58 CST
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I feel it is my duty to inform you that hermaphrodites dont have semen. So jenny couldn't have cummed.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: Midget Tsunami On: September 15, 2004 00:23 CDT
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OK no i'm sorry i can't tell you that was a good one-shot becuse that would in be a total lie. Look, if you want to write a lemon do it. Describe the sex acts that you want. Really if you want to write a good scene then you must have expirenced it. Honestly I don't know what else to tell you. JUst remember that you have been makred by The Midget Tsunami
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 03:36 CDT
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*eye twitch* jenny...has...a...dick. WHEN WILL THIS MADNESS END?!?!?!?
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Title: Jenny's Secret
Reviewed By: May496 On: May 24, 2004 16:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! Write longer ones!
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Reviewed By: Locke Watcher [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 21:29 CDT
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*laughs loud enough to scare neighbors, again* Sorry, but I wrote a similiar fiction last summer, but Joy was the transexual and I had more detail and other stuff; porn movie was first then some talking between the two (I never got to the true sex scene of Joy/Jenny, but I left it for open for discuss and for writer's block). Have to argee with Peggi, lime not lemon, and shorter then most One-Shots. But good work.
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Reviewed By: Peggi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 17:34 CST
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Okay well first off, this was more of a lime then lemon since it's not very descriptive. Pretty well written though. It was short *even for a one-shot* but pretty good. Not what I would call my 'favorite' pairing from Pokemon, but, hey, it works! I'll leave you alone now.
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