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"Routine Maintenance" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ]
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 Reviewed By: alonie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 25, 2006 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
i loved the story. you ought to write more but i gess that would be hard. hmmm
 Reviewed By: aLeXa  On: August 31, 2005 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great fan fic...I hope to read more works by you
 Reviewed By: Anonymousb  On: June 21, 2005 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This Fanfic was excelent. I had just finished reading another FMA fic that was only defined as FMA by the names used, ignoring any plot elements. Whereas you not only got the general idea of the Anime/manga's theme, but made a direct hit. This could easily be syncronised in line with the canon of the anime with just a few minor additions.
 Reviewed By: Jenna B  On: June 01, 2005 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked the story but the part about him not having an arm or leg in the moment bothered me
 Title: cuzins'
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2005 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool ,but cuzins... T_T
 Title: WOW :]
Reviewed By: Femme15  On: April 06, 2005 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
omg! It's sooooo beautiful.I've read it about 20 times I love it! I hope you write more! P.S. I think I could pull sopme of these kinky 1 liners on my boyfriend.
 Reviewed By: Demetz [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 18, 2005 19:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good writing, some of the best I've seen on this site. For a one shot, thats a huge compliment from me.
 Title: That many!
Reviewed By: wowedx10  On: March 17, 2005 20:53 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved the fic, but more to the point... why do you have so many hentai freinds! I wish I had freinds that shared my intrests like that!
 Title: Permission to MST?
Reviewed By: vorahk829 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 10, 2005 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I would like permission to use part of this story for MST purposes. Not that this sucks; it rocks completely. I just wanted a lemon to MST for a "Whose Line" fic I'm typing, and this was the first thing to pop into my head. I'll add a plug for this story if you want.
 Title: beyond cute!
Reviewed By: greengal48 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 23, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i've just started watching this show on the cartoon network. i've always thought that ed and winry should be together. this is beautifully written. please write more with this couple.
 Reviewed By: Kitty (Hellokitty_4_ever)  On: January 23, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok...UPDATE please...Don't let this one be a one shot. And If you do update please email me and tell me...Because of Richard I can't remember anything anymore. It's painful when you get hit in the head because of a book...He did it because I broke his chair like 27 times. But still that's no excuse!^_^
 Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 22, 2005 10:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
 Reviewed By: dragon88 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2004 19:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVED IT!! I've read this about four times now over the months and lemmie say that I ADORE it!!! ^^ How cute!! Oh, and presently they are both fifteen or so I think. We have only seen four or five episodes for those who are watching it on Cartoon Network as well! ^^()
 Reviewed By: Prettynpt13  On: December 12, 2004 01:32 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Um, marriage? Uh... Eds 12.
 Reviewed By: Terran  On: November 29, 2004 20:06 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You did a good job with this lemon. You're definitely skilled with words. Good luck with any future ventures.
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