| "Misunderstanding" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: plz On: March 29, 2005 23:40 CST
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GOD FINISH WOMAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 17, 2005 19:50 CST
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You're killing me with the suspence. Is Inuyasha gonna get there in time? What is Naraku planning to do in the future? Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 17, 2005 17:37 CST
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Excellent chapter. Never would have expected Naraku to cross over, that certainly was an interesting twist. I can't wait to see what happens next... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Inuyashin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 10:09 CST
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Hi there, just want to let you know I like your story. It's interesting so I'd love to read more. And more often. ;-) Luna
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Reviewed By: SIT! On: March 12, 2005 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thourly enjoyed your storry. I beg of you to please continue with the storry. Yours, SIT!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 11, 2005 19:14 CST
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Excellent chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: November 02, 2004 17:09 CST
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Because often the right thing is often the most painful...even if it in this case it was wrong. Excellent chapter. I can't wait to see what it is Naraku has done and what effects it will have even as Kagome and Inuyasha have been torn apart. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: junsei On: October 29, 2004 15:48 CDT
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you evil evil person. update that again!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you have a great story playing off the characters and a great opening issue to be resolved. i'm glad to see your still working on the fic and i hope that you continue to do so. you have a great depiction of the character motivations and personalities. keep it up. :-)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 28, 2004 18:40 CDT
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Interesting chapter. I wonder what this could mean and what damage it will do to the relationship between Inu and Kagome... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Tuborgwolf On: August 18, 2004 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pls update soonest!! I love thsi story, and also youkai lust, but need my fix soon! update please!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 02:59 CDT
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I must say you have captured everyone perfectly. And I like the way you set up the same situation with a twist. It is a very good idea and turns out that you have made it a wonderful story. And as much as I want to strangle the little brains InuYasha had out I must agree that he would leave to see Kikyo...even if I hate to say it. I just wonder if InuYasha was agreeing with Kikyo or referring to something else. My first thought was that he was going to send her back home. (Where you think he would have taken her anyway seeing as the care over here is better…) But with that dead clay pot's smirking, well...He wouldn't. Would he? I can't wait to see what you have planned next. And for english not to be your first language you are doing exceptionally well. Be waiting for your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 04, 2004 19:43 CDT
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Don't want to kill you but I am confused.. Another interesting chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Silvering [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 20:13 CDT
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I like it! You've got a good grasp of the characters' personalities, in my opinion. And the English mistakes aren't too distracting either--just some verb tense problems occassionally, none of the usual careless mistakes that are sooooooo irritating. :) Found an editor yet? (lol)
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Reviewed By: koaru_luvmiroku1002 On: May 13, 2004 20:54 CDT
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This is a really godd fic!! Well, okay, so inuyasha hurt kagome, and yes kagome might die, but it's a godd story!! English isn't my first language either, so I can't type real godd. Keep going!! Arigatou!!
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