| "The Goddess Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: MarsStarlight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 18:47 CST
Comment/Review:
The story is coming together well. I hope you make another one soon.
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 01:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I guess your not then... it WAS a good story...
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh great story! I noticed your last update was in may, re you going to continue it? just so you know... all of the dumb CYOAs get tons of reveiws and everything else only gets one or two... so if you only get a couple reviews that means... your story is good! ^_^ I think the nly ones that are reviewed are the ones where they can be paired up w/ kurama or hiei. w/ the exeption of a few comedy ones.... if you update that bumps it up to the top of the list and more people might read it! I'm adding it to my faveorates just incase you decide to continue it so update soon!!! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it all a ten because all the detail in it was really good, you described everything to make sure that the reader could have a picture in their mind, which I think is really cool. Keep on writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter[s]!! - Katrina
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave it all a ten because all the detail in it was really good, you described everything to make sure that the reader could have a picture in their mind, which I think is really cool. Keep on writing, I can't wait to read the next chapter[s]!! - Katrina
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