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| "The Choice of Hanamichi" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: What the heck kinda fic was that?..... But i still luv it! ^-^
Reviewed By: shiyuchiyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv the fic although you did say you just editted it from 'the choice of Marpessa' but still it's a good read. Ah... if you haven't noticed though the fic's just too.. well... um... short. Yeah, that's the word I was trying to find. S H O R T! Ai yah... But, nvm. However, next time if you wanna write another fic, could you write a little longer than that? I know I sound pretty demanding and all but hey, you got the makings of a good if not great writer, moonriver, so if you wanna write another SD fic just keep that in mind. Oh, btw, the fic's just not very satisfying. Maybe because it was just too short. Ok, that's all the critisims and praises from me.. Ja! P.S. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ^^
| Reviewed By: Phoenix Maiden On: May 06, 2004 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 for style of writing because it was REALLY short..not good enough to be rated higher than a 5... spelling and grammar and originality/creativity were both rated a 10 because it was REALLY short and there was rarely anything wrong in the story.. but even if the story was REALLY short, it was VERY original.. if only it was LONGER and more elaborate... i know that it would have been more enoyable to read... and i would have been more satisfied... i hope you'll rewrite/revise it soon!:D i like the plot though the story's quite short!:D GAMBATTE!
| Title: sheesssh
Reviewed By: whoami On: April 05, 2004 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's very short. although i understand it.
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