| "Inuyasha is a Pokemon?" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: N200x [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 18:28 CDT
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Um... I was originally known as N2000, just so ya' know. Anyway, when are you going to update. This is hilarious. Update, please!
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: July 26, 2005 11:29 CDT
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this is rather...interesting... you have all the characters out of character. this is just plan freaky. well, now what are you going to do? you have sesshomaru as inuyasha's master. that should prove to be interesting. and brock is no where near as bad as miroku with women. and please bring shippo back, yes i know he can be annoying, but he can be helpful at times. please? pretty please? *does the puppy eyes* please? update soon please.
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Reviewed By: Sakota [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2005 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*falls of chair laughing* hahahaha that the best! *trys to get of floor but falls down laughing* hahahaha can't stop laughing hahahahahaha Inu-yasha's back! hahahaa
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 13:53 CDT
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Chapter 5 is the best chapter ever! They broke the forth wall! Ha, ha, ha!
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Reviewed By: N2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um... yeah.... this is sweet, but what's up with your dialogue? You have all your quotation marks in the wrong place.
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Title: no it's not my real name
Reviewed By: Tori Elric On: July 15, 2005 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN'T HA-HA BREATHE... CAN'T STOP HA-HA-HA LAUGHING ... .... ..... HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA- HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm... ok, i'm...ok! *passes out* ^_^'
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Reviewed By: Neo_Dog101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 10:04 CST
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THAT WAS THE FUNNYEST CRAP I EVER RED!!!!!! YOUR A GENUOS!!!!!! pLEZ MAKE MORE FUNNY STUFF LIKE THAT!!!!! ^.^ ^.^
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2004 09:03 CST
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yea finnaly up dated!!! and it's going to be coutiued!!!
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Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 20:45 CDT
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hey, update soon! anyway, I think you should make it that miroku finally leads Sess to Sango and Kagome, then when Miroku and Shippo are about to save them, sess stays outside and says, "I'll wait here..." and then he patiently starts waiting while you hear screams of terror. then he can say: "Uh, hurry up in there. I haven't got all day, I have a sword to gain, a brother to kill, and a wrold to rule!" otherwise, this is hilarious, hurry and update, or I'll e-mail you, muhahahahahahahahahahaahahahah!
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 07:35 CDT
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YAAAAAAA its random!!!!!! hehehehe i cant wait to fuigure out what happens. and no wonder pikachu doesnt like to stay in the ball! lol!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: kitkat22 On: June 02, 2004 20:47 CDT
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very, very, very, very, very very funny!!!!! ALSO! DO NOT MAKE SANGO AND SESSHOUMARU FALL IN LOVE!!! HE'S MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hisses* anywho, update soon, bla bla bla. Idea: make inuyasha and misty fall in love. it'd be funny!
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Reviewed By: sakurcheery(2) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 16:00 CDT
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If I write a story or am reading one, I can pretend that I am doing my homework^_^. The only bad thing is now I am home-schooled...:(
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Title: COOL!
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for considering my idea! This is really cool!
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Reviewed By: sakuracheery2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 12:51 CDT
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I think that when I use subtitles on my Inu-Yasha DVD it it spelled kirira but said Kilila. But plz update soon! I wanna get out of doing my homework!(by the way I think that Inu-yasha and pokemon is a very good idea. now why didint I think of that...?)
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 20:07 CDT
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This was very ... interesting. Why did you have to kill Meowth? As I recall, from overhearing the show when my kid was watching, he was the only interesting character in the whole series. Other than that, kill more pokemon! I want Pikachu to get his!
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Title: Just an idea for the next chapter
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the next chapter, you should make it that Sess is taken to the Pokemon world too and make him find the pokeball with Inuyasha in it. Then he becomes Inuyasha's trainer. It's like: "Inuyasha, I chose you." said Sesshoumaru calmly. Just then Inuyasha came out of the pokeball. "What the hell!?! You're my trainer now?!?" Sesshoumaru smiled evilly. "Yes, now Inuyasha, do my bidding." "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" shouted Inuyasha. It echoed from that cite, to the neighborhood, to the world, to the unviverse. "Shut up and dry clean clean my fur boa." Sess said. "No, that'd be torture!" "What?" Sess asked, "It supposed to be happy fun land?"
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Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep updating! It's really funny!
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Title: a few mistakes; let me help
Reviewed By: mikokinu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 18:53 CDT
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Sango's boomarang is called the 'hirakotsu.' Inu-Yasha is a half demon. It is spelled Ki'a'a when I translated the name(nobody gets that right; there are no 'L''s in Japanese). Nobody cares about Psyduck. Inu-Yasha has way more moves than those. It is good but if you stick with the basic storie lines (no "okay that person looks wierd so I'll kill him) and no OOC's (no Brock being gay, Misty being obsessed, or Ash so self absorbed, etc.) then it will be awsome! (note: this is NOT a flame)
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Reviewed By: STAR GIRL 1991 On: April 17, 2004 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE A LOT OF IMAGINATION
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Reviewed By: Washu888 On: April 11, 2004 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it would be funny if inuyasha was sent to the pokemon center. please write more.
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Title: Great! Write more please! ^_^
Reviewed By: Sailor Star Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 03:14 CDT
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I like your story and hope you continue it! Why are you going to put InuYasha in a pokeball? He's a half human-half demon, and the balls shouldn't even be able to work on him, would it? Especially since he's half human?
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Reviewed By: Sailor Star Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 03:14 CDT
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I like your story and hope you continue it! Why are you going to put InuYasha in a pokeball? He's a half human-half demon, and the balls shouldn't even be able to work on him, would it? Especially since he's half human?
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Reviewed By: k_g On: April 09, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol its pretty good i like your idea's, except TOO MUCH ERRORS!!with the " " and the spelling too check them before you post -_- and also you went to fast with the story anywayz why would INUYASHA listen to ash & stuff??he could find the well easily i bet too.inu's a bit OOC,but its a pretty good story so improve in the grammer & actions and you'll do perfect!
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo freakin' funny. Pleae tell me when you're gonne update soon. I love this story. Keep workin' on it kid! *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 13:28 CDT
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lol inu-chan a poke'mon pleaz update soon
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Reviewed By: LIL ANGEWL On: April 05, 2004 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SANGO'S BOOMERANG IS CALLED HIRIKOTSU.
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