| "Not Forgotten, Not Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: sweetnsourgirl001 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope u update soon its a good story
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 20, 2005 04:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
when r u going to update??? well, i hope its so0n...
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 12, 2005 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are u gonna update??? :( UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 07, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! why'd you have to stop? *whinning* i wanna know what happens next, so please, please, please finish the next chapter... oh! and finish the rest of the story too! PLEASE!!!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: dbz maniac On: November 11, 2004 02:52 CST
Comment/Review:
i kenw u wudn't let me down more more i wann know if trunks likes pan other then an object of insult
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Title: COME ON I WILL KILL IF U DON'T UPDATE
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: September 18, 2004 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
i am lovin this pls don't stop lol if i was pan i would take the top off the sippy cup go up 2 trunks with bolin hot water grab his pants and pour it in ther he deserves it lil barstard lol
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Reviewed By: Yokiko Pan On: April 20, 2004 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think that was a great start, I know the next chapter will be good too, so I'll be going on to the next chappy.
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