| "In These Final Hours" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2013 05:02 EST
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I don't know if you are still receiving reviews from any of your stories, it's been 8 years since you posted, but I wanted you to know this is one of my favorites and has withstood the test of time. I still come back and read it every so often. thanks for leaving it up. |
Reviewed By: inspire_me (please ^^) On: July 13, 2005 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was looking at your ratings, and since this is one of my favorites, i was shocked when i saw that i hadn't reviewed! ^o^ I'd like to say that this is a very good story. Thank you for writing this fanfic. I had the wonderful pleasure of reading it.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Ronin_gatekeeper On: April 07, 2005 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is the best story that i have ever read on here. i fought people for the computer so that i would be able to read some more on the story. And let me tell you, that is life and limb. This story is absolutly great and i think that the author needs to write other stories *hint, hint*
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Reviewed By: reality loss87 On: June 02, 2004 17:38 EDT
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wooo-hoooo! you updated! i hope theres just a little more, like what happens in their happily ever after senario... anyway even if there isn't, i loved this story! you write very well, i hope to see more fics from you! thanks
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Reviewed By: Lena17 On: May 11, 2004 18:01 EDT
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This was absolutely awesome!!! I loved the story, please continue it!
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: May 11, 2004 10:16 EDT
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The story is great but you should put a lemon where it belongs instead of the line.
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Reviewed By: the little sparrow On: May 02, 2004 16:46 EDT
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wooo hooo!!! you updated and your frequent about it! i love you! what will happen to kaoru? i hope she knocks that guy for a loop! woooo hoooo i'm so happy, please keep writing
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Reviewed By: Caeria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:25 EDT
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I don't normally review every fic I read. I try to save that for the really good ones. This one qualifies. You've got a plot, which is a weakness of mine because I adore a fic with a good plot. Not that the occasional PWP is a bad thing, but it's nice to throw a filet mignon in amongst the candy. And not only do you have a plot but the smut (which was very nice, by the way) went with the plot. You also had some great character development to make them your own, while still keeping within the framework of the characters developed on the manga/anime. That is not always an easy thing to do, hence the out-of-character characters running around in a lot of fics. You writing was excellent. You used real sentences and punctuation. I can't tell you how many times I've stopped reading a story after the first two paragraphs because the writer didn't care about sentences or punctuation or spelling. And lastly, you got me so hooked, that I couldn't wait for you to post the chapters here at mediaminer and went looking for the completed fic at FF.Net. Excellent story, thank you for the couple hours of entertainment.
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Reviewed By: Angel Wendy On: April 30, 2004 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man screw you hilaryduffdasecond, i think this fic ROCKS! What do you know, you can't even spell. Anyways, I LOVE this story! Please update real soon! And don't listen to hilarydapartypooper, there is plenty of excitement.
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Reviewed By: hilarydufda2nd On: April 21, 2004 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so corny....no excite,emt at all...BORING
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Reviewed By: Isolated Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 23:48 EDT
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NO!!!!! Not a cliffhanger!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: reality_loss On: April 19, 2004 12:39 EDT
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ahhhhhhhh!!!!! what the hell just happened?? well i mean i know what happened but ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! please write your next chapter. i can't take it!!!
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Reviewed By: Isolated Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 12:09 EDT
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This is really good! I hope you finish the next chapter really soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: reality loss On: April 11, 2004 16:01 EDT
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ahhhh! this is so great. and finaly theres some excitement, not that so far this whole story hasn't had me enraptured! please keep writing and updating!
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