| "I Am Waiting for Something to Go Wrong" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: ;>_
Reviewed By: inspire_me (please ^^) On: July 13, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, i don't really like lemon, but i did enjoy ur other stories. I suppose that that is a bit opinionated though. :/ The only part that left me a little iffy is Inuyasha's character. However, i suppose the rest is okay. (excepting the lemony themes. I really hate that stuff. ): ) Good job on your writing. I hope to read more
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story, i love your writing style too. I hope this isn't you're only Inuyasha fic because it's really good and your talent should be shared with us who love to read this! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tsuyoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 22:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I really don't think that you've gotten enough reviews to justify what you have written here. I mean, I like how you put a reality check into the series. Really great and I also like how it is put together and sounds like a real dramatic TV show is going on when you've just played off of a comedy! Keep writing fics!
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Reviewed By: fourleafclover003 On: April 13, 2004 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it. You're right, Inuyasha doesn't mince words, and I think this keeps pretty close to their original characters. As far as reviewing goes, there is a kind of intensity to this... No angsty stuff from Kagome about being used and everything, but that's good. Some of the lyrics aren't in italics, though. that kind of gets a little confusing, but that's a minor detail...
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: Pkat On: April 07, 2004 08:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was REALLY good!!! I loved it!!! :) Write more soon!!! If not on this fic, another one! :)
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