| "Trauma" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kagomegirl On: October 19, 2005 11:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon. there arent enough of this pairing. they are so kawaii together. keep it up!!
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Title: meow
Reviewed By: moon maiden of time [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you've got to continue this. Hiro X Suguru is my favvy pairing and there's not enough fics with them that actually have them all in...not suddenly in love. I like the part where Suguru's all blink blink 'did i just think of hiro as cute?' ...Plus, I wanna see how the whole 'i-must-throw-Ayaka-out' thing will happen between her and hiro.
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Reviewed By: Na (Draechaeli) On: August 02, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must continue, I've only read this chapter a few times already and I would like to read what you do. I never liked that girl (who tells their rival to keep fighting for the love of their mutual love?. Anyways it's a great beginning and a lovely pairing, I can't wait to see how you'll put those two together! ~Na
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yes please do continue the ficcy. I really wanna read Hiro throwing that bitch out! ~Na
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Reviewed By: Alea On: April 26, 2004 07:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
THROW HER OUT! THROW HER OUT! WOHOOOOOOOOOOO eghm...ok well anyway its a great storie and u just have to update soon! *goes chibi* petty pweeeeeaaase!?
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Reviewed By: Fujisaki-kun On: April 13, 2004 08:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes, you have to continue! Hiro x Suguru is my favorite pairing in the whole series and i'll go crazy if it's not updated!
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