| "The Return" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: Yuki_snow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe sorry bout the Japenses I'm kinda part japinses and i like the Fanfiction i know this is a very new Reveiw and all but I wanted to give you a few suggestions...this is like a diary fanfiction but you shoudl try adding more into it then just a few sentences like mabey six or seven paragraphs and try putting in the diary parts for chihiro in a few parts...not being mean or anything but it would make it so awesome but i love your sotry alll the same and I hope to be reading more...Eh What can i say for my nosy life....I'm a novelist so I like to see Writers like you do well!. Please continu your sotry i hope to be reading more.
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Reviewed By: hima On: April 04, 2005 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
you should keep on writing your really good pleas write more
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Title: alright
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 12:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats great that your updating regulary i've been waiting for this story to update for forever it's on of my fav's keep up ja ne
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Reviewed By: i-am-gamer-hear-me-roar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Very nice! Update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 21:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was sooo awesome plz continue really soon
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Title: Ah! write more!
Reviewed By: Dragon_Shaddow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 07:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
You must! *needs to see more*
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