| "The Story" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good fic!! I like it a lot and wish that you write more!!
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 17, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops hehe I just finnished your 6th chapter and you know what I really think that I should read the whole story and the review. -_-
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 17, 2004 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finnished your fifth chapter and I'd like to say that I noticed that there are alot of k names too there's Kagome, Kikyo, Kouga, Keade, Kurama, Kuwabara, and Kayko, like you said. And the few that you missed Kohaku, Kagura, Kanna, and Koenma. Thats all I Can think of any ways. Well off to finnish your story. Btw Its great so far.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 14:08 CDT
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GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANT TO KNO WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :)
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Reviewed By: Angelbaby13112 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 17:45 CDT
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Reviewed By: Lya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 15:45 CDT
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the story gets better and better! yay! cant wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:47 CDT
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don't forget kurone!! the bat demon helper of youko kurama!!! and koennma. or kirara thats it i belive unless you want to mention ms. karu from r kenshion.
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 12:34 CDT
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aparently not so stupid afterall if she got you to fall for that one!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 21:46 CDT
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update more soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:47 CDT
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i loved it. i can't wait till ya update. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Daughter [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter please update soon ok and wut r the pairings in this story????
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI that is good and keiko's name is spelled keiko cant wait
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Reviewed By: Kayori [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far.... please update soon~! I wonder whats going to happen next.... What are the pairingins anyways? oh well... BYEZ~!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 18:15 CDT
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interesting new chapter! plz update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 30, 2004 14:57 CDT
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Good chapter.Btw Kiade is spelled Keade. Also don't you think that they are acting a little too carefree when a village is being attacked and a shard is possibly involved. Also you say that Kagome has about half of the Shikon no Tama right? Well didn't Kikyo give Kagome's big chuck of to Naraku so that he create his incarnations, namely Goshinki, Kana, Kagura, and so forth? Anyways good chapter. Keep up the good work.
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