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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 04:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh I know it has been a while but Please update I hope you do I love this so far and I want to a see how you are going to make the history text come to pass for Kagome!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:48 CST
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um oops sorry about the last review i wrote it was for a different story. you know Koenma seems to be very incapable to rule spirit world in this story. and this was a big headache, *rolls eyes* Kagome should just tell them what is needed to be said and get on with it. If she must be sure the are telling truth give her a tour or something, if they must then show her demon world. but beside that it was a good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:47 CST
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you know Koenma seems to be very incapable to rule spirit world in this story. and this was a big headache, *rolls eyes* Kagome should just tell them what is needed to be said and get on with it. If she must be sure the are telling truth give her a tour or something, if they must then show her demon world. but beside that it was a good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 03:22 CST
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hey have yusuke and kurama|youko beat the shit out of inuyasha. and kill the bitch kikyo, to give back her soul.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 14:52 CDT
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ummmm Are you forgetting Karran and Kouren, the panther demons?
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Reviewed By: deathsmessiah On: April 20, 2005 16:54 CDT
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I think that your spelling a name wrong. In the manga's i've read they spell her name Keiko not Kayko but I might be wrong since i havent read them in a while. But other then that I think that your story is really good.
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Title: HURRY HURRY HURRY
Reviewed By: Sesshomarus misstress On: March 29, 2005 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALY ENJOY YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please hurry and post the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 10:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter 13 Plz Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 18:53 CST
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Kagome & Naraku, have a kid? Kagome & Kurama, are gonna be mates? psh not if Hiei kills Inu. And with his short temper... it's likely to happen. If I were Kagome and Hiei killed Inu, I'd never forgive him or any of his friends. Oh and lastly... UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiya!!! On: March 17, 2005 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awseom story! *two thunbs up* =D I have 1 request can you make the chapters a little bigger plz. (not trying to rude or anything. srry if it sounds that way =( )
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Title: ahhhhhhh
Reviewed By: Dark Redemption- On: January 31, 2005 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Read: *drool dribiling down chin* I can now litterally, LITERALLY feel my IQ points dropping...And I had a decent IQ before this too...OK, OK, I appologise(?) but you're in desprate need of a Beta-Reader. These reviews you're getting...well, to be honest they're from idiots. And, no, I will NOT appoligise for that. No matter how much it hurts. *looks at multiple reviewers* You are idiots. Constructive Critisisam, Constructive Critisisam... You have a fair bit of talent, your ideas may be a little bit clishe, but hey, clishes are clishes because they work right? OK, now, I'm willing to work with you on this to help bring out your inner Dickens. E-mail me at darkkoorime708@yahoo.com if you plan on getting any help at all. If not, theres no point in you continuing writing. Names, dates, spacing, capitilization, and grammer all need work. Its increadibly horrible to click a link to a fic you think would be a fairly good story, only to find that its absoloutly wretched. Not horrible, wretched! I'm sorry, but if you want help, I'll gladly help. Also, feel free to E-mail me and yell at me if you want. ^_^
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Title: More Please
Reviewed By: Miyoko Minamina On: January 30, 2005 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More I Need 2 Read More And I Really Loved It So Far Oh And Stop Getting So Stressted Out They Wont Kill U Unless U Just Stop Writing It Completly Ok
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: January 30, 2005 20:05 CST
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hmmm, I wonder how you're gonna have the meeting go....
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Title: Kewl
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 18:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i totally loved this fic, update soon
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Reviewed By: Demons-Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 15:49 CST
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Its not an inu/kag fic!!! *tears* *cryes* is it? Inuyasha and KAgome are the best couple!!! other than that its a good story!!
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