| "Under the Five Moons" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Just because I feel like reviewing again
Reviewed By: ShadowDragolf(not logged in) On: October 04, 2004 19:07 CDT
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Rating(s): Enjoyment Factor: 500,000 of 10 Overall Rating: 500,000 of 10 I think you deserve more than a 10 so here ya go!^-^ The characters are for once not OOC, which is amazing I might add. All of their kids, well they act like what you'd imagine them to act like. Overall just keep writing! Like I said before, whatever it is you write, I'll read it! ^-^ Oh yes and Jeramiah (I think that's how it's spelt...) had to be my favorite OC. *Drools* Anyway, great fanfic, it should be featured.
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Reviewed By: ShadowDragolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normaly I'm a bit kooky when I write reviews but now I'm gonna be completely serious: This has to be the best Trigun fanfic I've read yet. You've got a great plot and the story keeps on flowing. Keep writing, believe me I'll read whatever you it is you write.
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Title: YIPPEE!!
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 12:11 CDT
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I so happy that you stuck to this story to the very very end, and you didn't disappoint either! Action, action, action. "Chaos" is the right word for it! The funerals and final their goodbyes were poetic, sad and fitting. I love your characters (Evans **drool**) I would love to see them again 'in the future'. If the evil plot bunnies take over your brain again, I'll be sure to read what you come up with. Thank you so much for sharing your unique vision of Gumsmoke.
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Reviewed By: BontiaWolfSpirit On: August 14, 2004 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I have read other 'sequels' to the original, but this one is by far the best! You have made a story that feels like as if it was the sequel. Once again, great job and keep up the good work! ^.^ ~†~BonitaWolfSpirit~†~
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story feels very true to the original characters. It is clear that time has changed them, but that is what time does. Your original characters are a kick in the butt, Nikki and Evans, Jeremiah and Clamity WONDERFUL! I love that Nick is back, and even in not being there his son is very much His son. Can't wait to see read the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: enchanted_blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 13:50 CDT
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Great job! I agree with other person on that one. But the original Trigun series, quite frankly, pales in comparison to yours. Keep up the awesome work and know that your devoted readers will be waiting! So hurry! ^_^
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Reviewed By: enchanted_blood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I agree with the other person on that. You make the original Trigun series look pitiful compared to your work. Keep up the awesome work and know that your devoted readers will be waiting! So hurry! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a knack for building a story that feels "true" to the original. Well done!
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