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| "The return of Blizzer" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh... what happened to Kavu? The last time I saw him was when he put those little Meta Blizzers together but after that I don't see him anymore. Did he die or get killed by all of those blasts?
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww man! Did Kavu have to die so soon? Oh well, good chapter.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh! I like where this is going! And have it so that Blizzer is like Meta Cooler and can be rebuilt by Dr. Myu's computer (which just so happens to be on the planet M2; unlucky break for them) and also when he is blown apary can be created into 10,000,000,000 Blizzers. (hence the Japanese title of the movie "Super Fight! 10,000,000,000 Power Levels"; which is "The Return of Cooler" in America) Well, good luck writing the rest of it.
[ Request Review Removal ] | Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! IT'S NOT POSSIBLE! SOMEONE ACTUALLY KILLED GOKU!!!!! IT'S END FOR US ALL! AUGH!!!!!!! Sorry about that. Great fic so far and I must say the grammar and spelling (for some reason unknown to me and possibly you) is better than your other fics.
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