| "Free Me" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: leo89 On: August 04, 2004 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story I thought that the style was very unique and had a good swing to it... especially in the 3rd chapter! I can only remember one grammar mistake in the story (in chapter 2) all the rest was brilliant. I enjoyed the new out look on yugioh and the relationship between the characters. I emmensely enjoyed this story and thought it to be quite fun! My congradulations to the authors for a brill story and the author of chapter 3 had a particular way of writing that really invited you to read on and draw out your interest in the story.
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Reviewed By: Bankotsus ikeike [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 16:06 CDT
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Hey edvarquin, just ingnore me, i'm testin me new account, Bankotsu's Ikeike (Bankotsu's Bitch on your sugestion :) ) Toodles!
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Reviewed By: God Almighty On: May 07, 2004 12:12 CDT
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Hello Eddie. This is GOD. Your story was so fabulous that even I, the almighty ruler of the Universe decided to come down from Heaven and review it. Of course, I had some difficulting locating an internet cafe where you sinful mortals would let me in as apparently you have to pay for that kind of thing. Imagine! Asking me, God, to pay for something!! They regretted that of course after I struck them down with lightning and condemned them to eternal hellfire. I think I may be sending the four horses of the apocolypse rather soon as you mortals appear to have become sinful beyond belief!! I still can't get over it! Don't they know who I am??!!!!!! Yours holylly, GOD
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Title: George W. Bush
Reviewed By: bankotsus ichuunoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 11:52 CDT
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Helo mister eddie i hav to revew yur storee or else miss freekyness wil get me and she is mean i dont like her. i likd yer storee it was very intresting but i thinke it had to meny big werds and i got confoosed so mayby you shudnt hav so meny big werds. By-by Gorge w bussh
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Reviewed By: David Bowie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 11:44 CDT
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Why hi there eddie! I, David Bowie, decided to come here and personally review your story after I got I got an interesting death threat implying that I should "review or die" from some female who only went by the name of "Miss Freakiness" This Miss Freakiness then decided to hold me hostage in her house for 17 hours after I declared that she should get lost and that I would not review any online fan fiction of any of her strange friends. Yes, she got quite mad after that statement and decided to go about tormenting me by making me watch various anime shows for the full seventeen hours straight WITH NO TOILET BREAKS. I now can't here the words "Inuyasha", "Fushigi Yuugi" or "Akira" with out slipping into a Post Traumatic Stress relapse. My therapist has adviced me to stay away form all things Japanese including noodles if I want to avoid any more blackouts. But anyway, I must now hurry as Miss Freakiness has just stopped by my mansion with her rain stick and is advicing me to hurry up and write this goddamn review unless I really want to lose some of my vital parts. So yes I found this fanfic quite exilerating and am looking forwared to reading more, Yours faithfully, David Bowie
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Title: Bankotsu's ichuunoonna
Reviewed By: Mrs. Jesus On: May 07, 2004 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, remarkable. I found this fan fiction to be somewhat absorbing and written in a style that reflects the rather tantalizing nature of this variety of narrative. The nonchalant approach that you have applied to the subject matter of which you are writing is relatively spanking new and I wish to give a standing ovation for the palpable endeavour that you have undertook. Your sincerely, etc. Mrs. Jesus
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 10:35 CDT
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aww, how kawaii... Jou and Ryou need each other!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel7901 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 23:26 CDT
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Ok, you have me hooked, more please :)
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