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| "Realistic Fiction" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | Title: XD
Reviewed By: Blazing Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2005 00:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the absolutly most funniest thing I've have ever had the pleasure of reading! I hope to see more of your works, great stuff! xD
| Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 22:59 CST
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you updated! I'll love you forever! And ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever... you get the idea...
| Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2005 21:40 CST
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Okay I've tried being patient but I was so patient that I forgot that this story was in my favs list!That's where I draw the line! Would you please just consider updating sometime in the near future? I really am looking forward to reading more...
| Reviewed By: ensatsukokuryuha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time reviewing your story, and if I weren't such a lazy ass at the moment I'd probably go and post a review for each of your stories chapters. I may just do that, key word being 'may'. Anyway, you have small grammer errors and spelling errors from time to time but it's nothing that would really hinder your story in any way. This story that you have written is original and yet though it is a real self insertion fic, I enjoyed it. Mind you I don't really tend to like these as the author would talk about how they get pair up with one of the characters. So it intrigued me when you stated that you weren't going to do that. One thing though, you don't have to take my word for it or nothing but, when you first brought Yusuke into the story as Punk, I was confused because his personality didn't really sound right. Of course, I guess his so-called bad boy attitude could explain that part. In either case, that's just my opinion. Sorry if this offends you in any way. Feel free to e-mail if you'd like. Oh yes, Misako kinda reminds me of a friend I have, she is totally random and loves the color purple, but that's about all the similarities they have. Anyway, I hope you will continue your story. And I hope you like my long ass review. Ja ne. (See yah.)
| Title: Why do they need a title for a review?
Reviewed By: CatQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always wanted perfect tens... better you than me I guess. I was surprised when your story didn't appear on Fanfiction.net anymore so I decided to go back to this site. The story is very intertaining and I really hope you'll write more. (I need something to do. I'm dying of boredum at home! And don't tell me that it isn't possible because Fairy Oddparents just proved that it was.) Anywho, I'm going to get all dramatic here and say "You're an inspiration to me!" You see, I wrote a self insertion for my friends and I a couple years ago and I've been too embarassed to ever post it. So now I've given it a shot. Thanks a bunch for your entertainment. Dona the Cat Queen of Pluto
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2005 20:48 CST
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O_O It WAS Kuronue! And it was obvious! But I really couldn't care less! *glomps him madly* KURO-CHAAAAAAAN! *calms down- sort of* Sumimasen. (Excuse me.) But I get... strange impulses... whenever Kuronue shows up in a fanfiction... like I want to leap on him and huggle him to death... and pull his hair. ^^0 But enough about my odd fetishes... you updated! *huggles* I must say- this fanfiction- is ALWAYS making me laugh. Always. You're so- random! But in the funny way! As in, Exhibit A- "My fiance." Good Lord, I died. Me lurves it. ^^ Must force others to read- must spread the hillariosity that is Aya-chan! Nee! *runs off- into a brick wall- except not really, because that would make me look stupid- so I just passed out on the floor... hm... what was I doing again?*
| Title: I put my title in my name...clever
Reviewed By: Renard Roux (I've reviewed before right?...yes...we'll go with that) On: January 17, 2005 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I reviewed already (which my tiny mind isn't allowing me to remember if I have or haven't), then I'm sure I've already said the but I'll say it again *clears throat dramatically and takes a deep breath* SPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIF FYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! *clears throat again* Yes...tis spiffy spiffy spam in a jar...god, I need to get some better sayings *shakes head sadly* Well anyway, this has made a nice excuse to get out of studying for my French midterm tomorrow...thank you for your good timing in updates! ^_^ Anyway, you better update soon...or...well I dunno. Bye!
| Reviewed By: Kami-Chan On: January 14, 2005 14:54 CST
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Omg, this is the best thingamajigger I've ever read! If I was logged in, I'd add you to my favs! I liked this mostly because you wern't hung up on one of the guys, but you interacted with all of them. And the girls, of course. Great job, please continue!
| Reviewed By: Jus' me On: January 12, 2005 20:03 CST
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Yes, thank you. I originally avoided this fic because it sounded like a CYOA. I'm glad that your summary was disarming enough to convince me to give it a chance. I enjoy reading this because you've managed to create the sort of anti-Sue I always attempt to make, but lack the discipline to maintain. Mary Sueing is far too fun (for the writer, at least). Congratulations so far. Coincidentally, you remind me of my sis, except that she's stuck in the gleefully-random setting. Your persona has mood swings when it's convenient. Anyway, I'll continue reading, but I probably won't review again. My sis and I have sibling-opposite syndrome like Hiei and Yukina. My sis gets along with everyone - therefore I don't handle human interaction well. It's taken me far too long to tell you that I enjoy your fic, and ended up talking more about myself than about your writing. I apologize. I will probably regret I said anything the moment I send this.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 22:42 CST
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As to your 'sucks to be you' XP I'm allowed to be curious! It's not my fault my very nature is basically defined by this and ah, pity me, caution... So as you can see, or amybe you can't, I am curious. And it doesn't suck to be me! It's rather enjoyable actually... Heh, now ignore my rant and continue in your daily schedule... or nightly. But anyways! I just felt like typing this! Even if it had nothing to do with praising you, boosting your obviously over-inflated ego, or commenting on the story... er, somewhat...
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 22:38 CST
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And now Kurama's on to you... if you aren't careful he'll try his hand at writing a story... and I'm pretty sure it wouldn't turn out beautifully for all the fans... ^.^ Heh, that was a cute chapter, and I swear I've seen that last chapter somewhere else... or maybe it was just a semi-distortion with my mind and reality. So anyways, this fic promises to be interesting... no romance? That's a first.... how do I express my thanks over the internet without mortally wounding someone's pride? Wait... Thank you! I am curious to see how a story will go... if or if not there is romance... you never siad there wasn't, just none between You and Kurama, and Hiei and Misako. But that still leaves other things open... which I'll ignore. :D There, now! Feel praised!
| Title: SPIIIIIIIIIIFFY!
Reviewed By: Special Fox Girl (Renard) On: January 11, 2005 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SPIFFY! If you would like to know how spiffy this was on the spiffiness scale, I'd say spiffy spiffy spam in a jar, and u can't get any spiffier then that. ok, I'm done. I'm hyper and I've been around my friends way too much...yeah...scary eh? Well anyhoo, UPDATE OR ELSE! *twitche twitche*
| Reviewed By: A... M... K... On: January 11, 2005 17:29 CST
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Neeeeeeeeeeee! (You have me saying that now, onna!) I would guess that the demon-person was Kuronue- but he's dead *sob* and it would be kind of obvious if it was him... hmm... *deeeeeep thought* ... Oh well. ^^0 So- yah. Nee. Moo. Mou. Hn. All that other good stuff. Static DOES sound annoying, doesn't it? *shrug* Yay for updating, anyhow. Do it again! Pweez! I find this fanfiction verrrrrrrrry amusing! ^^
| Reviewed By: Spatial On: December 07, 2004 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have some grammar errors, not too bad, though. I liked your style of writing and the creativity of this story. I really enjoyed it and that makes me slightly miffed to see you didn't update this month. But overall, I really like this fic. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:11 CST
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That announcement is so true! *nods for emphasis* There is a difference between a Self-Insertion and Insert-You stories! And people shouldn't be posting them and then get all pissed once they get deleted or their account gets banned! AND people need to think outside the box, stop writing Mary-Sues, and start experimenting with (much) more realistic characters! God forbid that the OC can't beat up every boy in the series AND get them to fall in love with her! *realizes that I've been ranting* Eh heh heh... sorry bout that. You just got me all charged up. *cough* I tried that Giddy Female pose (don't worry, I acknowledge the fact that ownership is yours, please don't sue me fer copyright infringement or something) and I pulled a muscle in my leg. But that's what makes these little events memorable, ne? Don't worry, it stopped hurting after approximately three seconds, nothing big. ^^ OMG Misako is hilarious! XD Lol, you can learn a lot from crazy people like her. FREE THE PUPPIES! LOVE YOUR PRISONERS! STALK HIEI! ^^ Death to all the 'Shuiich' fangirls. Nee. (You have me saying that now!) I like this fic, and I think we're going to get along, partly because we have approximately the same knowledge of the series, partially because you're so darn loveable! As a character, naturally, I don't know you so I wouldn't- know you. Yesh. Well- bye then!
| Reviewed By: kitsuneluvuh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 17:09 CST
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Love the story, keep it up, yadda yadda yadda... Yah, I'm lazy.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 04:33 CST
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Hmm... actually, I'm sorta surprised there aren't more reviews... *shrugs* Though, since I'm already typing this, why hasn't Koenma gotten on your case for being 'all-knowing'? Just curious, but I'm sorta surprised. *Bwink* sorry, that I could not resist.
| Reviewed By: RabidFangirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was amusing. Way too amusing... -_-... I guess I'm glad to know other random people exist! It's a great fic, and we will hope Hiei doesn't catch on to your plan to clone him for the gold. ^^ Please continue soon!
| Title: Renard (Fille Spciale De Renard)
Reviewed By: Fille Spciale De Renard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2004 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is pretty damn cool! Update soon kid. Haha, sry, couldn't resist! Onyvey, Yay!
| Reviewed By: HieiWannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 21:10 CST
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I happened to see your summary, and I thought I could clarify something for you. 'Self Insertion' is supposed to apply to the author inserting him/herself, not to 'Insert You'. If you check the main MMO page, down near the bottom you'll see a list of disallowed fictions. 'Starring You' is one of them. I've read the site managers' reasons for this, and, as I recall, one reason such fics are no longer allowed is because many people were confusing 'SI' with 'CYOA', just like you saw. There's a thread...somewhere...in the forums that goes into the different categories, so you could try locating that for more info.
| Reviewed By: Hieis1RFG [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:47 CDT
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You're another one. It's been five months! When are we gonna get something else? u.u
| Title: XD
Reviewed By: Truekailun On: May 16, 2004 19:19 CDT
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Great fic! Please continue. It's great and really funny [at least, I think it's funny XD]
| Title: ^_^0
Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! This kicks ass! ('scuse the language) Keep writing!
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