| "The Chosen" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kiyomiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg..how could you?!!..who cares..blah i want to know what happend to kai and rei!! -cries-
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Reviewed By: O_O_OO_OO_OO_OO_O On: April 17, 2004 07:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats a great fic, i reckon its good how u made so that only some survive, not all....coz wen all of them survive it just defeats the purpose, also i makes it so that not everybody is ok and u've wrapped up all loose ends. great fic.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sad that their twins didn't get to live especially on how Tala and Elaina were together. preaty good story but nothing special.
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2004 17:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
this chapter, chpt 12, is not 'full'. the begining words of each line are cut off. thought you should know.
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