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"Marbles" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]
 Reviewed By: Kage Tsuki [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 24, 2004 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.o that was so strange...but now I can send it to people ^^
 Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 16, 2004 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
XD that's so great!!!!!! really entertaining, although short. woooo!!
 Reviewed By: Kakari-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 24, 2004 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good ^_^ I liked it lots! I always seem to have problems with spelling and grammer, but like RoseWater said, it's an easy thing to fix. ^-^ You did a good job of show their personalities!Please keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Shimmering Rosewater [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2004 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Super super cute! I loved it! Lol, Eclipse is so gentle and so patient! ^_^; The only thing though is that you had a few grammatical and spelling errors. But those are able to be fixed, ne? One example is in the line "'But they are for playing aren't them?'" It should be they, not them. Just a suggestion. Like I said, they are fixable. But other than that, I really enjoyed your story! You must make more! Please do! And be sure to double-check your work for errors. ^_^ From one writer who thanks the gods for making MS Word with spell-check. lol (trust me, I make sure to use it often, everytime I write a story.)
 Reviewed By: DemonAngel90 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
KAWAII!! SO CUTE! This was such a nice fic! Eclispe is so...dreamy....*sparkle* Raenef is so..just KAWAII! I liked it. Anyway, Email me if you make more of these Demon Diary fics!

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