| "Feigned Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: mybuttisonfire On: October 22, 2004 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is an awesome story. Very original, keep up the fantastic work! Don't leave your dedicated readers hanging!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 00:04 CDT
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AHHHHHHHHHH~!!!!!! You STILL havent written anymore!!!!!!!! (I'm one to talk, pft.) Please write more!
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Reviewed By: KuramaLover#? On: July 03, 2004 07:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. That was just...so...WOW! I mean it!!! That was one of the most amazing, exquisite, and totally awesome fics I have ever read! You have an outstanding skill when it comes to writing. And I'll say it again: WOW. (BTW, this is a really original fic -- great idea!) So, please write quickly and update soon, 'cause I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! Oh, and keep up the good work! ^__^
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: June 18, 2004 19:43 CDT
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holy crap! kurama killed him! please update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HFS!!!!!!!!! NICE!!! we REALY loved that, and what kind of illusion is Karasu using? will he eventualy rape Kurama? please write more of this soon, its soooooooo good!!!
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Title: Feigned Innocence
Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb writing! Usually I concsider the Karasu thing a bit overdone, but this story is excellent. I hope that you do update soon, as I really want to know what happens next- you've got me hooked!
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Reviewed By: mhmartini [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. I am eagerly awaiting your next update. I really love the way you get inside the characters' heads, and describe their feelings/thoughts. Please update as soon as it's convenient.
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Reviewed By: Kitty-yasha On: May 15, 2004 11:09 CDT
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great fic!!!!! I LOVE your style of writing, really descriptive and you do a really good job describing their emotions and thoughts. i also like the story plot. it kept me interested as i was reading it. It was also paced really well so i didn't get lost or anything. i can't wait til next chapter!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... there isnt nearly enough of this, you realy should continue it soon, that would be sooo nice!! ^___^
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Title: Creepy,but COOL!
Reviewed By: Dark_Shadow_Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY ROCKS!UPDATE SOON!You did a wonderful job on their charecters,and personalities!Is the stalker Karasu as a human?Update soon!
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: May 07, 2004 15:06 CDT
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mooooooooooooooooooooooooore! update sooooooooooooon
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Reviewed By: mhmartini [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting... I am really enjoying your fic. You're a very good writer. Please update soon, I'm dying to read more!!
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Reviewed By: KitsuneSilver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! It's Keaira! And Keaira's excellent fics! Hello, Keaira. Don't let me scare you. I just love your writing, that's all.
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Reviewed By: KitsuneLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 12:27 CDT
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That was good! Interesting and definetly an attention-grabber. Please update soon, I want to know what happens!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 19:09 CDT
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veeeeeery interesting.update soon pleaaase.
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