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| "Winter, Again" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Hello again!
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 (It says I'm not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 14:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, how are you? Did you update? I should've added you to my favorites, so I could keep up with your progress. I'm glad that you added another chapter, Chapter 6... I believe. Anyway, I'll get to reading it as soon as I can, but I truly think that it's very good fanfiction so far...I really do! I still haven't read your other fanfiction about Spirited Away, I haven't seen the movie, but from what I've heard it's an interesting film. Well, see you soon and I hope you continue writing more!
| Title: Not bad...not bad at all.
Reviewed By: Amy (...Anderson45 at forums) On: May 03, 2004 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling and grammar are very good. The originality was a little low, since it reminded me too much of Harry Potter, but in Japanese. You might consider having the English in bold (For your 1st Chapter), instead of in italics. It's hard to read, especially since the print is kinda small. Spread out the Japanese words and don't have them so close together with the English sentences, such as your second sentence. It might just be your formatting but anyway, good luck to you!
| Reviewed By: Kat the white ice kat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 17:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update! -Kat the white ice kat
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