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Title: interesting.
Reviewed By: EmErAlDdRaGoN699 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats an interesting story but you need to get more chaps up and the ending was odd. id like to see more and like the other review said it was short and i hope if you do update its longer cuse youv had so long to work on another chap.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 23:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Shoort, but good. I like the ending.
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