| "Kagome, The Prized Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: March 01, 2005 16:55 CST
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wow that was so good! i loved it. cant wait to read the rest.
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Title: soon coming soon!
Reviewed By: sailorstarfighter777(notlogged in) On: February 24, 2005 21:16 CST
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I promise it'll be soon...got writers block
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: February 24, 2005 16:36 CST
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that was a great chapter. i have read the others but i didnt get to reveiw ( i wasnt even supposed to be online!). so im reviewing now. i cant wait till inu gets to sess's house!
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Reviewed By: ace8888888888888 On: February 13, 2005 19:02 CST
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whaaaaat? whaaaaat?! dang. i cannot believe that. good work.
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Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: February 13, 2005 18:31 CST
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lol. dang, he is pretty smooth. and i cant believe that inuyasha really was innocent. whats gonna happen when they meet? i think im addicted to this story now. too bad i have homework
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Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: February 13, 2005 17:19 CST
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ooooeeee sess is fine the way ur describing him. even though he is jus a cartoon. u know what? they should make a movie for the big screen of inuyasha. thats not animated but uses real people. how cool would that be
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: February 13, 2005 17:01 CST
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lol. i liked the taxi thing alot. i especially like how honest and open they are with each other since theyve only just met. and kagomes mom really had me going. i thought some drama was going to start
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Reviewed By: sofrshnsocln008 On: February 13, 2005 16:16 CST
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this was a great chapter. i like your writing style because its pretty unique.
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Reviewed By: Neko_Chaos On: February 12, 2005 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved yur fic! it's now one of my favorite Sess/Kag Fics!!!!WEeeeeeee...(okay I think that i had too much sugar while reading it. hehe. Any Who... Great Story!
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: January 30, 2005 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this chapter. i love how you described sangos voice over the phone. and i love how you describe new york because ive never been there but i can picture it. and i like how you had kagome thinking about the past and i loved the way she and sess met up. but your writing style seems so familiar...have i read something of yours before?
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: galaxia-dawn On: January 28, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fanfic so far. it has great grammar which is a must for me, but i also like how you have put this into a modern setting. i love your descriptions of the facial expressions, those really add to the story. my friend has highly recommended this to me and even though i had never been to this website (i do fanfiction.net and fictionpress) i will continue to read. good job.
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Title: (not logged in)
Reviewed By: sailorstarfighter777 (not logged in) On: January 24, 2005 01:00 CST
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Hey there. Thanks for your responses. The hentai chapter is almost done.
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Reviewed By: SacredArrow89(not logged in) On: January 23, 2005 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just found your story and I love it! I am though a little sad that it's going to end because I think that it could be so much more longer. maybe you'll make a sequel. In the short time that I have had reading this story I'm just sad to say bye so fast. But I guess all stories must come to a end, even though I or other's don't agree. All we can do as reviewers is prey that there's a sequel. Lols. Anyways, your story is awesome and I don't see anything wrong with it. Again love it and can't wait for the last of it, though it'kll be a bitter sweet moment.^.^ Later Days.
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Reviewed By: skitzoflame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to say that i love this fic ^.^
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Reviewed By: aikotakara (not logged in) On: January 19, 2005 18:49 CST
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OMG!!! ive been waiting soooo long for this chapter! and i was not let down, awsome chappie *nod nod* please update again soon!
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