| "Kagome, The Prized Possession" Reviews/Comments [ 230 ] |
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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 03:29 CDT
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WOOT!!! luv the story so far! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Sailorstarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 15:40 CDT
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Next chapter will be posted before Thurdays! Enjoy!
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Reviewed By: medatsu (not signed in) On: July 18, 2004 15:24 CDT
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Nice chapter and nasty confrontation with Kag and Inu! lol :P
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: July 18, 2004 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh snap! I LOVED this chapter. We finally see where all of Kagome's cab money comes from.. she should get a town car and a driver! Or maybe Sesshoumaru should and he could be all like Big from Sex and the City and Kagome could be like Carry and.... blah! Off track again! Oh how I could have beated Inuyasha like a rented mule! And Miroku, didn't expect Sango to give him her digits; but it was cute. And the best.. TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES!!! AAAAAhahahahahahahahahaha!! I laughed a good 10 minutes over that part. That's so cute how Kouga and Sesshy have became friends, lol. Ah man, I loved it. Keep up the amazing work. Hopefully this review will post all at once this time. Until next time-- Aitu
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Title: Cancer_18
Reviewed By: Cancer_18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok ill be honest with you, if i couldve went higher then a ten with enjoyment and the overall rating, i wouldve put it at at least 50, im the kind of person who knows what they like, and that, ladies and gentlemen, was one of the best stories ive ever read in my life. i was captivated from the moment i read that first chapter, and i hope that i dont have to wait long until i can read more. the only thing i saw a little off would be the spelling. but i dont stop reading cause there are spelling mistakes, i stop reading cause theres nothing to read, ok, im running out of characters here so its best i just shut up. please update soon and i hope i get to read some more soon.
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Title: whoa...
Reviewed By: Kausagi Moonlight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 11:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
verrrrrrrry interrestink.......hehehe! Well...that was...Interesting....i like it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: CoOlChIcK On: July 16, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is a funny, romantic story. But I REALLY REALLY want to see who Kagome picks. Please let it be Sesshoumaru. Also, did you mean to make him sound like a Guidance Counselor in this story, cause that's what he sounds like. Using a whole bunch of words. You're very discriptive. That's good. SO PLEASE UPDATE SOON. ^_^ I gave you straight 10 10 10 10 10. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ^____^ On: July 16, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the ending!!!
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Title: Uh... Monkey's??
Reviewed By: Ryoko3600 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh... your story so far is good.. yeah.. an you should update soon... Yeah thats right!! Real soon!! So soon that a monkey would .... would... you know what forget it!
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Title: =0)
Reviewed By: SailorStarfighter777 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 17:44 CDT
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Title: *angry face*
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 16:00 CDT
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(Sorry for taking up all this space! If the damn thing would just take all of my review, I am far to stubborn to just not post it. I will beat the comptuer!!!) Next, yes! I like fire crackers, but then, snakes and sparklers are fun too! Just think--what if someone made a giant snake, like it was 8 feet across, just think, how would you light it? Start a camp fire around it. Then think of how big it would get; it makes me laugh just thinking about it. Oh no, somehow I have seen to have gotten off track again. I also like fireworks, well actually, anything that is a big explosive if fun! So whether a chapter be a snake and sparklers, fire cracker, or a nuclear bomb type chapter, I will still love it! And also loved the part where Sesshoumaru and Kouga start to drink and play chess. hehehe, I think they should get into some drinking games, lol. When your drinking any game can be a drinking game. For instance, we have put cards to shame as Slap Jack and Go Fish have been shamelessly been made into drinking games. Next, ut o! I sense bad about to happen with Kagome going back to Sess's house with no him there and just Inuyasha there. And yey! No more Naraku and Sango. Well I am about to run out of Characters so I better say farewell. Keep up the amamzing work! I LOVE IT! --Aitu.
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Title: Don't play games with me MM.org!
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:58 CDT
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Title: Fuck,Fuck, fuckity fuck! *inserts the beeps too late*
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:58 CDT
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Awwwwww! how about another giant heart felt "awwwwww!!!" hehehe. Oh my, where shall I start with this review? how about from the end, starting at the begining get's old. First off, I love the "where does Kagome get the cab money from?" hehehehe, I find my self thinkin that stuff too from time to time, But I guess I didn't notice it in this story-- oops >.
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Title: grrr, its cutting off my review! It WILL accept the entire review!!
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww! how about another giant heart felt "awwwwww!!!" hehehe. Oh my, where shall I start with this review? how about from the end, starting at the begining get's old. First off, I love the "where does Kagome get the cab money from?" hehehehe, I find my self thinkin that stuff too from time to time, But I guess I didn't notice it in this story-- oops >.
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww! how about another giant heart felt "awwwwww!!!" hehehe. Oh my, where shall I start with this review? how about from the end, starting at the begining get's old. First off, I love the "where does Kagome get the cab money from?" hehehehe, I find my self thinkin that stuff too from time to time, But I guess I didn't notice it in this story-- oops >.
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