| "As In Autumn" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written. I had some trouble following the flashback/present time-line, but I got most of it figured.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 15:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was so powerful...*holds back tears* i love it.
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Reviewed By: merangelgal On: October 29, 2006 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow - that was beautiful, so sad. It made me cry! But I really enjoyed how it was written, though some of the multiple story parts were a bit confusing, but once i got used to your style it was really good. I haven't come across an end of life story before, but it was beautiful. Thank you
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Reviewed By: Princess Sere-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
That story was soo good. I actually started to cry at the end. I don't usually cry, lol. keep writing!
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