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| "The Black Rose Arc: One: The Black Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: hjdfhj On: August 06, 2004 14:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello! Well the story is interesting. But I have few comment. First author note in the middle of the story is annoying. It kind of break the flow of the story. Second, don't describe the characters clothes all at once. It's look like a crime info or something. I like the way you first done it, you know when Quatre was looking for its boots? Well that a good way to tell the reader what they or will wears without make it too long. Three, you use the word GOTH way too many time. You use it so often, it sound like a job description or a social club in the school. Except for that, it original and I'm curious to know what will happen next.
| Reviewed By: Yuki Valentine On: May 05, 2004 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it 100% it was so great ! so can you like please write more I want to see how this goes and I'm always avalible to help if ya need ideas Lots of love, Yuki Valentine
| Reviewed By: chaotic kat On: May 04, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so when does the rest of crew come into it.????
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