| "What Naruto Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: Just 'cause this fic's kinda awsome
Reviewed By: TheraHedwig On: November 22, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a kinda funny story I must say, I really liked how you put the Sasuke fangirls in this one, and of course sasuke and Hinata themselves. Somebody once said that sasuke was according to him capeble of thinking 3 things: Fluffy pink bunnies, Naruto, and killing Itachi. looks at the reviews, poor you, you have 2 sasuke haters, someone who says narusasu is just plain weird(while it's one of the most common fanfic pairings) someone that gives this fic ovel a 2 just because you made sasuke think dirty things. and luckily for you there are also sane people out there that do know when to review a fic. I really like this fic, so like others said before: Continue (Goddammit!)
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: ryuuki_chan On: November 10, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD XD I love this. The beginning may not be the most creative, but the rest kixx0rz t3h 4ss. SasuNaru, w00t~ Too bad Naruto doesn't feel the same... T_T But overall, I loved it. And my suggestion is more yaoi! :3 Eh, if not, s'all good. Don't want to mess with the funnies. ^_^
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Title: no foolin
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I laughed so much... you really need to write another chapter soon. this is the best thing since, like, instant ramen. seriously. no foolin. - Chaos Damn It
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Reviewed By: cell phone reader On: October 17, 2004 13:03 CDT
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I've really enjoyed this fic. There were many parts which made me laugh out loud. Mainly the parts when Naruto was talking to Shikamaru and Sasuke really made me laugh. butterflies and happy things. Oh and Hinata scared me. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: uchihasasuke16 On: October 10, 2004 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still am pissed about the parts of your stories that involve Sasuke and as much as I want to kill u I cant cuz then I wont get to read the rest of it, anyways dont put Sasuke in this anymore ok? Or else I will hunt u down and really kill u!!! And I'm dead serious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: uchihasasuke16 On: October 10, 2004 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... I gave u a 3 for enjoyment factor because u made Sasuke gay and twisted and why 'a good spanking'?!?! I really thought that ur was actually good but then why did you make SASUKE GAY???????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit???????????? That is the most *eye twitching* thing in the world!!!!!! Ugh!!! I enjoyed ur story and all but. MAKING SASUKE GAY IS TOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes I know I'm totally crazy. But I have a right to fight 4 what I think is right or wrong. And I think thats its wrong to make Sasuke gay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!So anyways I am very very super mad that you made Sasuke F*****' gay!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Pancakes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:49 CDT
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*dies laughing at Naruto's misfourtune* BUWAHAHAHAHA!! who'da thought SASUKE of all people would have wet dreams about Naruto?! and yes, i find your twisted sense of humor extremely amusing as well =3 why would Shikamaru know about Sasuke's obsession over Naruto, though? i know he's a genius and all that whatnot... but... o.0 gawd. poor Naruto... XD update soon!! ===Bloody===
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Reviewed By: Riyo-san On: September 23, 2004 16:33 CDT
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I like that story! It's funny! I want to see the rest! I want to see what's happening! Update please!
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Reviewed By: Sabaku On: August 24, 2004 20:07 CDT
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: FFantasy On: July 17, 2004 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god, this is so funny!! I had to save all the funny parts, like the twleve part. Please write more!
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Title: riotous!
Reviewed By: de_tensai On: June 15, 2004 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I showed it to my sis and she loved it as well. Heck, we even kept retelling the funny parts to each other for our delight. The only reason this fic is one point shy away from a full rating is that its not finished ^^
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Reviewed By: lightstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok few mistakes in spelling but i just love the story... oddly i think you might have gotten hinatas thoughts perfectly in character. i think you should have hinata come back she is easly the funnyest character in this story and choji.. i think thats what hes called (inos other team mate)and i think the konnohamaru corps would be good for some humor. bring back kakashi *forms the kakashi surport group*
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Title: ooh!gaara!
Reviewed By: happier monkey On: June 04, 2004 22:06 CDT
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yay! i do like gaara... probably too much...^_^; ehh heh heh... that would be cool if shukaku was thinking simultaneously... why is lee so normal??? i would have thought he was i little stranger... but i guess if you're that strange on the outside... =_=;;; well... whatever! great story so far! ya gotta write a longer chapter though... i almost died when it ended so suddenly... *cries* well, i'm wasting energy writing this much... buh-bye!
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: B.A.T. On: May 31, 2004 23:57 CDT
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I'm glad to see the Sand siblings here, not so glad to see a short chapter. All the same, things are getting interesting. As it stands, Naruto has two immediate allies; Shika and Lee. If you're aware of the increasingly popular TemaShika pairing, it'd be funny to have Shikamaru helping Naruto out and when in close contact with the siblings, some really strange things on Temari's mind, but that's assuming you're a fan of that pairing, lol! I'd like to see what's on gaara's mind, and if Shukaku's also thinking simultaneously. All the same, I'll never know unless you update soon, so UPDATE SOON! AND MAKE THE CHAPTER SATISFYINGLY LONG!!! THIS IS TORTURE! -Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
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Reviewed By: Nakama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Yaoi! ^^ Heh. Oh come on Naruto, you know you like Sasuke staring at your ass..
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