| "What Naruto Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: narutos alter ego [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
plz update
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Reviewed By: Shimerao-Alkardi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 15:44 CDT
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This may sound really stupid but I happened to glance at the summary for this fic and one of my friends has just been struck by lightning and i though 'Shit, can she read my mind now?!' before I realised that it's not actually possible. Just thought that might amuse someone.
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Reviewed By: ookamiman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: narutos alter ego [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay
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Title: me ttoo
Reviewed By: narutos alter ego [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think its funny also. so either im crazy and have a twisted sense of humor too or this is really funny .(i hope its the latter)
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Reviewed By: bluefate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 11:10 CDT
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This is a really interesting fic...you're running a little astray from a plotline, but I'm really curious about how you're going to play Gaara!
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Reviewed By: kurogai15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 16:58 CST
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The last chapter was hilarious. I love Hinata's thoughts XD. Please update!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 23:58 CST
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Its been awhile I hope you havent forgoten this because it is good and I would love to know if he gets cured or not
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Title: InuyashaNaruto
Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its been almost a year since your last update does the hokage help naruto or does he get fixed on his own?!?!?! Does he keep the power?!!? UPDATE ASAP
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: Kagome_HHH [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i love this! plz update
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Reviewed By: Isadora The Great [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're writing style is intresting and funny but, in the earlier chapters, you kept putting random author's notes in the middle of the story. It didn't look good and confused me. I have to commend you on knowing basic grammar and spelling, and certainly made your fic more enjoyable to read. Although the idea was not the most original one, you really added your own feel to it and gave it a fresh flavour. All in all, I found this fic a great read. The only thing that really detracts from it was the first three chapters, which were very messy and hard to read. Please keep up the good work, and don't give up on writing this story!
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
You continue now! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kasuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work, its too funny!!!
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Reviewed By: el spazidente [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 08:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
friggin hilarious. ive read it like 5 times. and my sense of humor might be more twisted than yours. i think up stuff like insane squirrels that twitch all the time. squirrels that are as strong as a friggin bear. squirrels that rip peoples faces off. and twitch.
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It gets better every time I read it.
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Reviewed By: princess_shirley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!!! that was funny! i cracked up laughing when i heard hinata's, sasuke's kakashi's adn shino's thougths. you got to keep updating! well just update soon! cos your fic is really good!!
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Reviewed By: NekoKaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha...that was fantastic. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing when I first saw Hinata's thoughts. The smuttiness of the males is really quite amusing, too. Can't wait to see where you'll take this in the end (hint hint, update)
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Reviewed By: anime_gal1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Iluv it iluv it i luv it!Udate soon and keep up the awsome work
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Reviewed By: je suis100 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic but does some of the characters have to be so perverted.Update soon and keep up the good work.
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Title: please update
Reviewed By: kunai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please i demand you update
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Title: pixie
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really,really, really good story but....longer chapters *whips you* (hinata style apparently,lol)
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Title: The father of all sick, funny crap
Reviewed By: Aikutsugan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, that was great, yet sick at the same time. Hinata has THOSE thoughts? I imagined something more...innocent. That thing about Sasuke in chapter 4 was sick, man! Keep up the good work!
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Title: TEHEHEE!!!
Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tehe!!! I luv it, I luv it, I LOVE IT! please don't stop writting thuis for a year again. This is one of the funniest Naruto fics of the site! Keep up the good work!
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Title: at last
Reviewed By: qt_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
that is so nice! please update again!!! i cant wait to see what happens next!! please! *makes puupy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
I"m so glad you continued this..cause this is FANTASTIC:D I absolutly LOVE this...THANKS:D
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Title: 7
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 18:04 CST
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he's nearly lost what sanity he has and he says it won't be THAT bad if he stays that way a bit longer...LMAO:D Great chapter
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:58 CST
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poor Naruto hehehe,...that was AWESOME...he should nkow better than that:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:43 CST
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oh man, and he never did figure out what was up w/Gaara and his siblings...GREAT chapteR:D I can't believe he actually got into a fight w/LEe...heheh...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:25 CST
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ROTFLMAO!!! that was FANTASTIC...oh man, I don't think Naruto's sanity can survive another visit from Sasuke...LMAO:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 17:19 CST
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OMG...that was WONDERFUL./..Poor NARUTO:D I LOVED it...OMG...it was HILARIOUS...I always wondered what was behind that shy demeanor of Hinata's LOL:D THANKS:D
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