| "denial" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
reiko, i'm glad you finished this up... but you killed him!!! i sorry i had to ddo that. see u on thursday.
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Reviewed By: koneko romulae On: June 08, 2004 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
reiko this is not working ok? just stop now or ill replace that collar with a noose!!!! or some other type of torturing device.
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Reviewed By: nhamot [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good rieko. just don't turn this into a lemon !!!!!
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Reviewed By: Master-YokoRyoushi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you could have written a better hentai. I want to see them do it. Continue it you must
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Reviewed By: Itsukami Urokum [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Botan: hahahahahaha! i made you look like a slut! Me: botan, shut it! sorrys for that, she REALLY gets on my nerves. good ficcy. SAYONARA!
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