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Title: Which Final Fantasy is this?
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 (Hmm...very interesting) On: May 11, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction is quite fascinating and intriguing, I've never read something like this before...well maybe I have, but this one's completely different somehow. Which Final Fantasy game does this fanfiction apply to? I've never played all the games, except 7, 8, and maybe a little of 10. Anyway, I would love to read more of your story...the character Lavitz sounds almost similar to the Knight in Legend of Dragoon...but it's probably just me, since he's name is so familiar. The only major thing that I noticed is just a few run-on sentences here and there. In addition, you have a tendency to repeat yourself. Your dialogue is fine, nothing really wrong with it that I could see, and the same thing goes for your paragraphs as well. They don't seem that long to me, but try not to make them too long later on in the future…to avoid losing one's place and all, especially if it's a long battle scene. Well, continue writing more of this fanfiction (since it started off pretty good) and I wish you the best of luck!
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