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| "sonic_dare" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: good oppertunities
Reviewed By: Clonetrooper198 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 11:40 CST
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Keep going, add manic, shadow and others scenario: manic pisses off sonic and sonic gets amy to hit manic in the crotch as many times as sonic ran from her! :D also add fan character pearl, has a thing for manic, light blue hedgehog and a psychic. many oppertunities for this fanfic, keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Clonetrooper198 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Great start, i'd love to see more
| Title: GOOD JOB!
Reviewed By: ImSonicCrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a very nice job with 1st 2 chapters. Can you use my 3 fan chars? Here are their bios. Name:Kira Crystal Lake Nicks:Crissy, Gem, Laken Age:14 Species:hedgehog Looks:Pale pink fur, tan muzzle, inside of ears and arms, beautiful emerald green eyes, long quills with blue tips Wears:blue skirt, white blouse,dark blue headband,sky blue shoes,sapphire heart shaped earrings,golden wrist bracelets and aklets Likes:Almost anything Dislikes:Eggman and everything bad Crush dun dun dun:Sonic Personality:Kind, gentle, and sweet, and can\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'t get angered very easily 2nd Name:Flare Fire Nick:Flame Age:15 Species:Echidna Looks:Reddish/orage fur and dreadlocks with purple on the tips of the dreadlocks,firey red bangs with hints of orange and yellow,blue/green eyes,pale brown muzzle Wears:black tank top and skirt,dark blue shoes with a purple strap across the middle,metal plating on the shoes Likes:Fighting as long as it\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'s fair,good sportsmenship Dislikes:Dirty fighting,sore losers Crush:Knuckles Personality:tought,stubborn (sometimes),fair,nice but if you get Kira upset,you\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\'re in trouble. Last Name:Light Hedgehog Nick:Hikari Age:16 Species:Hedgehog Looks:Ok, he looks like Shadow, only his fur is white with blue streaks, and his tuff of fur is jet black, rubyred eyes Wears:Those skates (dunno how to describe them), black finger-less gloves, silver bracelets and aklets Personality:Quiet,stern,but ca | Title: btw
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 05:57 CDT
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ohh btw my name is Tom T Echidna
| Title: yay
Reviewed By: the rad red [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 05:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
good start can i been in this fic please im a purple echidna from the icecap zone who has a secret crush on tikal
| Title: Oh yeah!
Reviewed By: Yami Bijou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
My name is Amanda!
| Title: Keep going!
Reviewed By: Yami Bijou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 18:11 CDT
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I'll suport you! Umm..can I be in it, I'm a 13 year old monkey who is sort of a flirt, in other words, she likes Sonic, Shadow, Knuckles, and Espio. ^__________^
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