| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: the secret saiyen On: December 23, 2002 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I THINK ASH&PAN ARE THE CUTEST COUPLE THERE IS!!!!Get Ash&Pan in a pic together kissing |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!!I have been into crossovers for a long time.And I have never seen a Ash&Pan before!!!!So please put Ash&Pan together on a date or something!!!!!!
ps:Did you ever notice Ash does not look a thing like his mother.So,I think that Ash is a full blooded saiyen.And say that Ash lied about his age!Put that he is realy 18.Because a 13 year old boy and a 16 year old girl out on a date would just not look right!!!! |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will someone tell me what the romance was,because I didn't see any!
PS Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: December 04, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Yugioh is right!!!Get Ash and Pan in love and make Ash a full blodded saiyen |
Reviewed By: the hidden fighter On: December 04, 2002 19:08 CST
Comment/Review:
FROGET TRUNKS!!!!!!GET ASH&PAN ON A DATE TOGETHER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: saiyen On: December 04, 2002 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This gives me a whole new idea on pokemon and dragon ball GT |
Reviewed By: Yugioh On: December 04, 2002 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Get together Ash&Pan together as boyfriend and girlfriend.And make Ash a full blooded saiyen!!!It will make the story WHAY more romantic and cool |
Reviewed By: Yugi On: December 04, 2002 18:14 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
4 words GET ASH&PAN TOGETHER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: November 18, 2002 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think what should comke out of the egg is a Eevee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write Soon
BYE |
Reviewed By: Keiki On: November 18, 2002 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think what should comke out of the egg is a Eevee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Write Soon
BYE |
Reviewed By: Brainsmon On: November 06, 2002 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well great fic chapter so far, I hope you get pan spilt from the others for a while(I don't hate ash and Co but I want to see pan on her own journeys) with matt thornberry(maybe a small romance,with him calling her panny to) and a thrid new charater,plus this idea if you want to use it:
In new arena,
Pan:hey guys(matt and new charater looks at the logo on the poster)the whole thing is at top of a huge MT
A pokemon tourament ever 4 years,
poff oak:pan this will be a trainer's dream to win
Matt: Ok panny,I will win this
Pan: in your dreams
The battles greater, the comaption stronger
Rez(Guy dress in brown with bones on his belt) Go Marowak, come on little girl
Pan: all right neb go
alex(good looking guy in a magican costume)Go Alakasam. Matt go(what pokemon? I said onix)
only one will win,
pan: neb get up
the Neo managa cup
I think pan show have a eevee?"blue"
well good luck
will matt goes to girls like brock? and they should be some guru pokemon triva where guru asked the readers questions about pokemon or what they just read in the chapter,think of it as omkae?
well later |
Reviewed By: Ash On: October 23, 2002 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is Rad, I can't wait to read the next few chapters. Write and update more soon. |
Reviewed By: Critic On: October 23, 2002 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You FUCK!!!!
Write More, OR DIE FUCKING!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Shader On: October 07, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE this though please go easy on old team rocket its not their fault their morons. Oh and i think you should make a chapter where lets just say.......... TRuNKS GOES INSANE AND BLOWS ASH UP!!!!!!! i like it but still pan and trunks should date or trunks and marron either would be okay |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: October 04, 2002 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story will you please write more soon!? And I think that Mew would be cool. |
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