| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Grymalkin On: October 04, 2002 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story if you would just keep writing!! you really should keep writing this its damn good. As for your question, Mew or Mewtwo would be good, it's something new and exciting. Just keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Gloria Stone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2002 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey:) this story is awsome:)
I can't wait to read the next chapters.
I truly love this story. Its the only crossover of this nature that actually is good:)
Peace
Gloria stone |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: September 12, 2002 23:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
On the screen it said that you updated. But there are still the same chapters posted. Did you add another chapter, because I can't find it. |
Reviewed By: chibi vegeta On: August 20, 2002 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have going here. you should make a chapter where Ash dies. please write more chapters, and oh yeah, Ash should die. |
Reviewed By: tidus On: August 20, 2002 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed reading this fic, please hurry and write more ok ! |
Reviewed By: sphinx_raider [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2002 20:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is the best poke'mon crossover I've read! *Go Pan!" I think you should get an eevee from her egg. -_-o I dunno ur adress |
Reviewed By: akira On: July 21, 2002 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
when are the next chapters coming up?
Cause i want plenty to read because it's damn exiting |
Reviewed By: Tiffany On: July 18, 2002 03:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i hope you update soon. I love reading your story and can't wait to see what happens to pan. Please keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: turtel1 On: July 09, 2002 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
when is the next chapter coming up?
please let it be much cause i wone read
a good story |
Reviewed By: digiboy On: November 07, 2002 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So pan and mewto going to fight I wonder what going to happen |
Reviewed By: lala On: July 03, 2002 10:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
it would be cool if the egg wasn't really an egg, and it was something else that mews are born from. i can't see pan and ash together cause i always like pan/trunks fics. and since we don't know anything about ash's dad, and he has the features of a saiyan, make it turn out that he's half saiyan or somethin. good story so far |
Reviewed By: akira On: June 22, 2002 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing it's one of the best story's ever
here on mediaminer.
p.s.:try to make pan a pokemon champion that will
be so cool. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: May 16, 2002 06:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
for your question i say Mew. and im loving this fic and im so glad you updated and if you call Ch. 3 shourt you must like Ch.s that are around 30 or so pages long.
love this fic must read more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: Ballistic On: May 13, 2002 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is overall a good fanfic. I like DBGT much more than Pokemon, but I thought this was a rather well written fanfic. In my own opinion, it went a little too far into the pokemon style of a story. Would Pan really like training Pokemon to fight? I would have thought that Gohan's environmentalist nature would have rubbed off. Like I said, it's just my opinion. All in all, your story is a good read, and I believe it is a very good idea for a story.
PS: Sorry I kind of copied your idea. In my own opinion my story isn't as good as yours, but I'll try to make it better. Hope you don't mind some competition! j/k. |
Reviewed By: Dragoon On: April 29, 2002 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I devour stories like a fat man in a buffet style restraunt. Despite that, I savored this one. Poke'mon stories are my favorites.
As it is, I think that the new hatchling needs to be a 'Celebi.' Since this doesn't have a 2nd evolution, I beleive it needs to become something like a Mewtwo type version of the squirt with an ornate style of flower growing out of its back, along with multiple vine-whips just snakeing out at all angles giving it the look of a sun made out of plants, but less round. The head would be covered in leaves (as in hair) and would be similar to that of a SSJ powering up. Roll it all together into a nice neat package that is always hovering, anywhere from 2 inches to 2 feet off the ground, and you have one awesome peice of Poke'mon. Depending on the name, it would be called Celation (celebi=celebrate:Celation=Celebration). As for the name, I leave that in your capable hands.
Damon Maddox
Age 17
Dragoon |
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