| "Flying Away" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: mimi On: June 25, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm sorry to say Ash will never get PAN EVER. but Misty and Ash goes good togather. Ash's dad can never and will not be a sayian. now i think and will always be a fan of TRUNKS AND PAN.oh and about the egg it could be MEW!!!!!!!!!. i LOVE MEW!!!!!!. Trunks could go get Pan and meet Ash and get the wrong idea about Ash and Pan and Trunks goes and kicks Ash's ass. Becuase he gets SOO JEALUOS. One more thing let Pan get either ninetales, butterfree, or bellossom. and for a water pokemon it should be seel, or lapras. okay.im sorry to sound demanding and rude but that's how i feel about this. but all in all it was a great story and UPDATE SOON love michelle. my e-mail is suziw@btconline.net. bye |
Reviewed By: tsuki On: July 25, 2003 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please updeate |
Reviewed By: kee On: June 09, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hope u update soon, very soon, very very soon |
Reviewed By: none On: March 09, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
he's right,If your going to insult something,DO IT RIGHT!!!!!!
And Ash/Pan are a preety good couple. |
Reviewed By: Mewtwo On: February 27, 2003 21:02 CST
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What are you talking about????????Ash and Pan make a good couple!!!!!!!!!!!!
PS:It's thank,not think |
Reviewed By: Brandon B On: February 25, 2003 15:25 CST
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Think goodness you aren't going to make it a Ash/Pan.... had me scared there for a while. |
Reviewed By: Youkai Youko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 19:51 CST
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ALRIGHT!
Great story.
Now, I want she's having a mew! |
Reviewed By: none On: December 31, 2002 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Why doesen't anybody wright a fanfic were ash is 18.So,Pan is only a few years younger so they can go out |
Reviewed By: Ash On: December 28, 2002 13:58 CST
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You got to get Ash&Pan together!Without that it want be a story!!!!
PS,Make Ash a full saiyen |
Reviewed By: the secret saiyen On: December 23, 2002 00:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I THINK ASH&PAN ARE THE CUTEST COUPLE THERE IS!!!!Get Ash&Pan in a pic together kissing |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!!I have been into crossovers for a long time.And I have never seen a Ash&Pan before!!!!So please put Ash&Pan together on a date or something!!!!!!
ps:Did you ever notice Ash does not look a thing like his mother.So,I think that Ash is a full blooded saiyen.And say that Ash lied about his age!Put that he is realy 18.Because a 13 year old boy and a 16 year old girl out on a date would just not look right!!!! |
Reviewed By: None On: December 22, 2002 23:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will someone tell me what the romance was,because I didn't see any!
PS Get Ash&Pan together!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: December 04, 2002 19:12 CST
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Yugioh is right!!!Get Ash and Pan in love and make Ash a full blodded saiyen |
Reviewed By: the hidden fighter On: December 04, 2002 19:08 CST
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FROGET TRUNKS!!!!!!GET ASH&PAN ON A DATE TOGETHER!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: saiyen On: December 04, 2002 18:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This gives me a whole new idea on pokemon and dragon ball GT |
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