| "An Encounter With Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: bsge On: August 24, 2004 16:27 CDT
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this sstory is great and can you update soon
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Reviewed By: deena151 On: July 30, 2004 06:50 CDT
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hey this is a really great story keep up the good work. oh yeah update soon please
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Title: evil
Reviewed By: Encana On: July 20, 2004 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very evil you had to leave a cliffhanger! I must update soon it is of the outmost importance! PWEEASSEE~ I want to see her secrete revealed! Another nice plot of another nice fanfic. lol I liked Inuyasha munching on the twig THAT WAS HILAROUSE! Please update soon!
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Title: spelling mistake
Reviewed By: Dippy Blonde Angel On: July 20, 2004 14:46 CDT
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Hey! I really liked your plot to your story but while reading chapter three I noticed a confusing spelling error; "The Northern and Eastern lands wanted to revolutionize and develop, while the Southern and Eastern lands wanted to stay traditionalist." It didn't make any sense! But other then that your fic was really great! I hope you add on to it later and write even more fanfics!
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Reviewed By: Minerva-not logged in On: July 20, 2004 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU!! You just had to end it in another cliffhanger. Tisk tisk. You enjoy doing this to us don't you. mumbles evil clffs author-YES YOU!!!!! (trys to be reasonable)Well, I guess its worth it just reading you story. And too complete this review-update please!
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Title: tragibo@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: wierdo On: July 15, 2004 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you ever finidh this fanfic please email me the other chapters. thank you if you do. great story by the way. later.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha=#1 fan On: July 05, 2004 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ppppppppllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more!
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Reviewed By: DieselTyphoon On: June 22, 2004 04:11 CDT
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Awesome story, I really like reading it. You're a wonderful writer, but you're evil with the cliffhangers. lol.
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Reviewed By: Sayochan On: June 17, 2004 14:05 CDT
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i know this is your story and you can do whatever you want, but i thought i'd just let you know that Inuyasha's mum's name is Izayoi. for future reference! **grins** keep up the good work - you write really welll, the story is coming great!
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Reviewed By: FALLENXANGEL189 On: May 23, 2004 01:51 CDT
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hey i like ur story also i think u r a really good writer. k thanks 4 listening p.s. WRITE MORE STORY
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Reviewed By: FALLENXANGEL189 On: May 23, 2004 01:51 CDT
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hey i like ur story also i think u r a really good writer. k thanks 4 listening p.s. WRITE MORE STORY
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Reviewed By: FALLENXANGEL189 On: May 23, 2004 01:50 CDT
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hey i like ur story also i think u r a really good writer. k thanks 4 listening p.s. WRITE MORE STORY
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Reviewed By: fungrl515 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 19:17 CDT
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this is a pretty good fic, but i must comment that it doesn't seem very truthful. Kagome should have had her monthlys, if you know what i mean. Inuyasha should have found out by now. the plot is enjoyable, and this would be a great fic if you just corrected your mistakes.
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Reviewed By: Minerva On: May 22, 2004 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessss! You updated,buuut you ended it with a cliff hanger!!! How could you? Oh well...you ended it off well I must give you that. Anyways please update! Bye.
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: Jnxz5 On: May 19, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, i wanted to read the rest so I saved it on my overall favorites list. i'm sorry I had to give u 9 out of 10, but I'm an english major and well... I found some errors. But overall the story is magnificent. well ciao, jinxy
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