| "They have returned..." Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Fanfic
Reviewed By: WHR_lover On: April 14, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have three words for u I LOVED IT!!!! please write more. You have not updated for nearly a year! Your story is awesome!!! P.S nice cliff hanger but pls donèt keep me in suspense
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Title: They Have Returned...
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Poem
Reviewed By: Wolfshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2005 13:40 CST
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Nice recomendation for the others writting. Not too many do that on this site. I've read the story that this poem is based on beforehand so that's what drew me to this poem. You did a basic summery on it very well! Hopefully you will get many more reviews on it. Thanks for posting this. WS
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Title: They Have Returned...
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 18:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Meletina (too lazy to log in) On: December 07, 2004 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
That was so cute!
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Title: They Have Returned.......
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 10:11 CST
Comment/Review:
awww...cutielittle girl!
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Title: They have returned...
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii I love it more more more
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Title: They Have Returned.......
Reviewed By: Canadian Chick On: August 05, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a awesome story but 2 short of one.If you add more chapters it will be even greater. Canadian Chick
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Reviewed By: Meletina On: July 29, 2004 00:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Add more, it was cute and stuff but it was way too short! ~~~Meletina~~~
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Reviewed By: Lacey Davis On: July 08, 2004 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thingy in this fanfic that i can not let go unnoticed is the bigest plothole i've seen in a while. You say this takes place 3 years and 6 monthes after Robin and Amon's dicipearence. if they had a child sometime soon after wasrds it would take a year to be born. so we have 2 and a half years left until this fanfic takes place. Now heres my question, How could a 2 1/2 year old girl form complete sentences? Unless she is a genius child i doubt this is possiable. Even if Robin had been pregnant while they were at the STNJ (which i highly doubt) it would still not be resonable.
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Reviewed By: hirome On: June 30, 2004 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a great story please I'm begging you to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Reviewed By: Rachel777 On: June 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this story a lot please keep updating i want to read the next part so again please hurry up and get the next part out
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Title: Where is the rest?
Reviewed By: Kristy On: June 10, 2004 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far, please write more! I've been looking everywhere for good Witch Hunter Robin fan fiction and now I've found it...but wheres the rest of it? Hurry, hurry, hurry! LOL
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel62186 On: May 09, 2004 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story....Love it so far. Please keep updating!!!!!
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: YH On: May 05, 2004 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay!!! I like the show, but I haven't seen all of the epsiodes. Your fic is going really good!! Please continue!!!!!!! ~~~~~ Heather aka Baby_A
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